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Traffic on road has become a problem in nearly every country in the world

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believe that
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pollution
is increasing day by day traffic has a struct by travelling which is a serious
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problems
in the every
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Nations
on the earth
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this is this is
going to elaborate the
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problem
and solution in the coming paragraph to
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begin
with the number of
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people
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problemsof
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reduced
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vehicle
such as awareness program should be
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organised
by the
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government
they should
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describe
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problem
about the global warming
as well
as
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pollution
there are
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many
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people
awareness of customer fare by reducing the rate of
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use
of
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vehicles
which side is two
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people
should respect of
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vehicles
should there
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please
days all over the world health
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problem
for the more
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people
are more using
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vehicles
since they note any profit due to increasing p
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pollution
day by day there are
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many
solution
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government
should provide any resources for
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government
should for more
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used
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vehicles
in every
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people
have our
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government
should
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make
strict
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rules
and
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people
follow these
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rules
summing up I tend to try that all the
mostly
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people
are using
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vehicles
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because
global warming
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pollution
as masses fulfill where for decrease
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vehicles
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IELTS essay Traffic on road has become a problem in nearly every country in the world

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
186 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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