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Write a paragraph of about 150 words about ONE of the demerits of street food.

Write a paragraph of about 150 words about ONE of the demerits of street food. W8wVa
When it comes to street food, especially one that does not meet the safety standards, its quality is always questionable. Many people are more inclined to purchase street food because of its inexpensiveness and convenience, but buyers do not care much about what they eat is safe or not and how street food is made. Street food sellers tend to put the profits above safety standards, so the process of cooking street food is not hygienic and is not thoroughly guaranteed to be clean, running a higher risk of having serious diseases caused by bacterias and germs at people who overly consume street food. In addition, dirty food which insect or dirt is on, scientists have researched, becomes a catalyst for cancer and migraine. Even though street food seems to be alluringly appealing to people of all ages, especially teenagers, people still need to be more careful of what they consume. All in all, low quality of street food is always a problem worth mentioning and paying attention to.
When it
comes
to
street
food
,
especially
one that does not
meet
the safety standards, its quality is always questionable.
Many
people
are more inclined to
purchase
street
food
because
of its inexpensiveness and convenience,
but
buyers do not care much about what they eat is safe or not and how
street
food
is made
.
Street
food
sellers tend to put the profits above safety standards,
so
the process of cooking
street
food
is not hygienic and is not
thoroughly
guaranteed to be clean, running a higher
risk
of having serious diseases caused by
bacterias
and germs at
people
who
overly
consume
street
food
.
In addition
, dirty
food
which insect or dirt is on, scientists have researched, becomes a catalyst for cancer and migraine.
Even though
street
food
seems to be
alluringly
appealing to
people
of all ages,
especially
teenagers
,
people
still
need to be more careful of what they consume. All in all, low quality of
street
food
is always a problem worth mentioning and paying attention to.
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IELTS essay Write a paragraph of about 150 words about ONE of the demerits of street food.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
169 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
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