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The given circular representation reveals the information about the average household expenditure in two different nations like Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010.

The given circular representation reveals the information about the average household expenditure in two different nations like Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010. 2ajGk

In an overview the highest percentage of horse in category as compared to other categories. Looking at details in Japan had highest proportion of other goods and services with 29% in 2010. While which was category of health care had least proportion with 6% in Japan but in Malaysia expenditure money on health care was only 3%. In Japan, which category of food spend money only 24%In Malaysia the highest proportion of housing category with 34% which category of transport had less expenditure in Japan and Malaysia respectively 20% and 10%. But in Japan housing category on only expand money with the 21%.

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category
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details
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Japan
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 and services with 29% in 2010. While which was You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdivisionkindgrouplevelgradesection
category
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least
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Japan
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but
 in Malaysia expenditure money on health care was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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Japan
, which You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdivisionkindgrouplevelgradesection
category
 of food spend money This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 24%In Malaysia the highest proportion of housing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdivisionkindgrouplevelgradesection
category
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category
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Japan
 and Malaysia respectively
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But
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Japan
 housing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdivisionkindgrouplevelgradesection
category
 on This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 expand money with the 21%. 