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the world has been an amazing reason in flights of for leisure business and commercial purpose around the World over recent years

the world has been an amazing reason in flights of for leisure business and commercial purpose around the World over recent years My1k6
irrefutable these people are travelling from one country to another for entertainment for enhancing their business and for training purposes as is going to elaborate that advantage and disadvantage in the upcoming paragraph to begin with people are enjoying in their life number of people believe that there are many messages to a donation because their people can easily refresh their mind and entertainment days apart from these individuals are coming from other country nevertheless they can easily gain knowledge and information experience as well as study work related word in can improve communication skill besides this there are a number of businessman these are travelling from other nation because they can easily growth of the economy for example mostly people after your preference prefer to foreign language they can know about tradition and culture on the other hand these did pollution is increasing day by day at an alarming rate all over the world there are many disadvantage that Robert dominant one is that in the resourceslike petrol and diesel which are produced in thousands years ago moreover the resources are very expensive and in one flight aeroplane consume about at of quantity of water is something up I tend to try that all the there are few merits and demerits of mankind can easily visit abroad beneficial in free time because they can easily concentrate to other nation
irrefutable
these
people
are travelling from one country to another for entertainment for enhancing their business and for training purposes as is going to elaborate that advantage and disadvantage in the upcoming paragraph to
begin
with
people
are enjoying in their life number of
people
believe that there are
many
messages to a donation
because
their
people
can
easily
refresh their mind and entertainment days apart from these individuals are coming from
other
country
nevertheless
they can
easily
gain knowledge and information experience
as well
as study work related word in can
improve
communication
skill
besides
this there are a number of businessman these are travelling from
other
nation
because
they can
easily
growth of the economy
for example
mostly
people
after your preference prefer to foreign language they can know about tradition and culture on the
other
hand these did pollution is increasing day by day at an alarming rate all over the world there are
many disadvantage
that Robert dominant one is that in the
resourceslike
petrol and diesel which
are produced
in thousands years ago
moreover
the resources are
very
expensive and in one flight
aeroplane
consume about at of quantity of water is something up I tend to try that all the there are few merits and demerits of mankind can
easily
visit abroad beneficial in free time
because
they can
easily
concentrate to
other
nation
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IELTS essay the world has been an amazing reason in flights of for leisure business and commercial purpose around the World over recent years

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