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Migration of in and out in the UK

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Overall it can be seen that definite job was the main reason for both relocating in and out of the UK while the least proportion of Britians left the country to acquire formal studyPeople who come to the UK looking for work accounted for 12 percent and increased to one in ten in emigrationPeople who no reason stated was 6 percent of immigration and had respectively growth of 18 percent in emigrationPeople who other reasons made up 11 percent in immigration and this figure rose to 14 percent in emigrationDefinite job seekers which less than third fell to 29 percent in emigrationAccompany join reasons were at 15 percent in immigration and slightly decreased by 13 percent in emigrationAlthough formal study more than a quarter of immigration it declined to 14 percent in emigration
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job was the main
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reason
for both relocating in and out of the UK while the least proportion of
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Britians
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the country to acquire formal
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studyPeople
who
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come
to the UK looking for work accounted for 12
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and increased to one in ten in
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emigrationPeople
who no
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reason
stated was 6
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of
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immigration
and had
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growth of 18
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in
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emigrationPeople
who other
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reasons
made up 11
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in
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immigration
and this figure rose to 14
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in
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emigrationDefinite
job seekers which less than third fell to 29
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in
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emigrationAccompany
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join
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reasons
were at 15
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in
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immigration
and
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decreased by 13
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in
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emigrationAlthough
formal study more than a quarter of
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it declined to 14
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in emigration
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IELTS essay Migration of in and out in the UK

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
132 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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