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traffic jams in big cities. Causes and solutions.

traffic jams in big cities. Causes and solutions. p5BRd
Nowadays, it is obvious that the congestion in most countries is on the increase and megacities are becoming busier. In my opinion, the growing number of private vehicles and poor transport infrastructure is responsible for the traffic congestion. There are not without workable solutions to address this. There are some reasons which cause the traffic jam. One of the main reasons is that the adult population is increasing and therefore more people want to own their personal transports which results in a high number of personal transportations. Ho Chi Minh city can be a perfect example in this situation when the growing number of private means of transportations due to the rising number of migrants has caused serious traffic congestion, regardless of time. Another significance is that inadequate transport infrastructure is not efficient enough to serve the travel demands of commuters. In other words, in undeveloped and developing countries, the popular public transport facilities such as subways, trains, buses, are either inefficient or unavailable. Therefore, it could not serve the increasing number of travelers day by day. There are two feasible solutions to the problem of severe traffic congestion in urban areas. One way to tackle this is to ensure that there need to be strict financial disincentives for deciding to ride a private form of transportation. For instance, if a person wants to acquire a second brand new automobile after the previous ones, they should be forced to pay an extra tax that can be used to improve the transport infrastructure and develop public transportation. Another workable measure in dealing with the above-mentioned problem is that the government should focus on making the transport infrastructure better. If the authority pours tons of money into fixing and upgrading the public transportation system, they will offer the civilians a chance to enjoy those public means of transportations in a proper way without considering whether they should use their private vehicles or not. In conclusion, although traffic jams in metropolises are a severe issue. There are not without workable solutions. By limiting the high number of private vehicles and investing in the transport infrastructure, the authority can minimize the problem to a manageable level.
Nowadays, it is obvious that the
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congestion
in most countries is on the increase and
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megacities
are becoming busier. In my opinion, the growing
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number
of
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private
vehicles and poor
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transport
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infrastructure
is responsible for the
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traffic
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congestion
. There are not without
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workable
solutions to address this.

There are
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some
reasons which cause the
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traffic
jam. One of the main reasons is that the adult population is increasing and
therefore
more
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people
want to
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own
their personal
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transports
which results in a high
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number
of personal
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transportations
.
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Ho Chi Minh city
can be a perfect example in this situation when the growing
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number
of
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private
means of
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transportations
due to the rising
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number
of migrants has caused serious
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traffic
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congestion
, regardless of time. Another significance is that inadequate
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transport
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infrastructure
is not efficient
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enough
to serve the travel demands of commuters.
In other words
, in undeveloped and
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developing countries
, the popular
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public
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transport
facilities such as subways, trains, buses, are either inefficient or unavailable.
Therefore
, it could not serve the increasing
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number
of travelers day by day.

There are two feasible solutions to the problem of severe
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traffic
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congestion
in urban areas. One way to tackle this is to ensure that there need to be strict financial disincentives for deciding to ride a
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private
form of
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transportation
.
For instance
, if a person wants to acquire a second
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brand new
automobile after the previous ones, they should
be forced
to pay an extra tax that can be
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used
to
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improve
the
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transport
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infrastructure
and develop
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public
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transportation
. Another
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workable
measure in dealing with the above-mentioned problem is that the
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government
should focus on making the
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transport
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infrastructure
better. If the authority pours tons of money into fixing and upgrading the
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public
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transportation
system, they will offer the civilians a chance to enjoy those
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public
means of
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transportations
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in a proper way
without considering whether they should
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use
their
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private
vehicles or not.

In conclusion
, although
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traffic
jams in metropolises are a severe issue. There are not without
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workable
solutions. By limiting the high
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number
of
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private
vehicles and investing in the
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transport
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infrastructure
, the authority can minimize the problem to a manageable level.
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IELTS essay traffic jams in big cities. Causes and solutions.

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