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Traffic jam is a problem in many towns and cities.Some people suggest that governments build wider roads in order to solve the problem. Do you agree or disagree?

Traffic jam is a problem in many towns and cities. Some people suggest that governments build wider roads in order to solve the problem. nVD2e
Migration from villages to towns and cities is the major cause for increase in the population. The process of developing a city/town demands extension of roads due to increase in vehicles. This essay discusses the reasons for road widening and the appropriate measures to be taken by the government and also few disadvantages which might curb the cultural diversity of the region. With increase in population, vehicles too increase which leads to accidents and also cause delays in regular activities of life. The interstate business also causes many deaths of the population as heavy vehicles occupy the major part of the road. Government has intervened to reduce accidents and deaths on the road by laying outer ring road in the cities for smooth journey to other states. Diversion of heavy vehicles to ORR and formulating rules for these vehicles if they run on the busy roads of the cities is also a major step taken. To smoothen the lives of the population residing in cities and towns, Government has demolished those buildings which are constructed illegally occupying the space of the road. Furthermore, it has also taken an extreme step to demolish old heritage sites which may crumble in the near future and cause threat to life of the citizens. It has not only widened the roads, but also, has constructed many fly-overs as well as underpass roads for easy diversion of routes. The only dark side which I see is demolition of old monuments because the cultural heritage is lost and might not attract enough tourists. To pen down, Government is right in its way, which reduces the life threatening accidents and deaths helping many families to live happily not losing their family members.
Migration from villages to towns and
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is the major
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cause
for
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increase
in the
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population
. The process of developing a city/town demands extension of
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roads
due to
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increase
in
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vehicles
. This essay discusses the reasons for
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road
widening and the appropriate measures to
be taken
by the
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government
and
also
few disadvantages which might curb the cultural diversity of the region.

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increase
in
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population
,
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vehicles
too
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increase
which leads to accidents and
also
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cause
delays in regular activities of life. The interstate business
also
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causes
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many
deaths of the
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population
as heavy
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vehicles
occupy the major part of the
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road
.
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Government
has intervened to
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reduce
accidents and deaths on the
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road
by laying outer ring
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road
in the
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cities
for smooth journey to other states. Diversion of heavy
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vehicles
to ORR and formulating
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rules
for these
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vehicles
if they run on the busy
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roads
of the
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cities
is
also
a major step taken.

To smoothen the
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lives
of the
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population
residing in
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cities
and towns,
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Government
has demolished those buildings which
are constructed
illegally
occupying the space of the
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road
.
Furthermore
, it has
also
taken an extreme step to demolish
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old
heritage sites which may crumble in the near future and
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cause
threat to life of the citizens. It has not
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only
widened the
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roads
,
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but
also
, has constructed
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many
fly
-overs
as well
as underpass
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roads
for easy diversion of routes.

The
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only
dark side which I
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see
is demolition of
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old
monuments
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because
the cultural heritage
is lost
and might not attract
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enough
tourists.

To pen down,
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Government
is right in its way, which
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reduces
the life threatening accidents and deaths helping
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many
families to
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live
happily
not losing their family members.
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IELTS essay Traffic jam is a problem in many towns and cities. Some people suggest that governments build wider roads in order to solve the problem.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
285 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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