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In the past teachers were primary source of knowledge . Yet nowadays students have vast source of information ,so teachers are no longer necessary in current education. Do you agree or disagree ?

In the past teachers were primary source of knowledge. Yet nowadays students have vast source of information, so teachers are no longer necessary in current education. 2rgOJ
There is no doubt due to enhancement in technology pupils are being used multimedia to know about their academic work than the teachers. It is true that in the previous time teacher played very crucial role but pupils gives more preference to other sources. To begin with, why teachers are important for students. First and foremost is that pupils can share feelings with them. If children stucks in any problem teachers can solve their problems at the time or clear the doubts throughout convenient ways as compare to other source of knowledge. For example, according to 'BBC' survey a teacher is primary source who provides the good example to pupils and they learn these education and become the brilliant person with the help of teachers teaching method. On the other hand, in the modern era, mostly students like to get knowledge from others sources that's good because they can know about various things on one platform but sometimes they prone to unreliable things. As a result, they cannot achieve their fourth coming goals. On the flip side, students can learn moral values only from teachers that are very necessary for the holistic growth of students. Moral values not only gives fame and fortune but also teach about how to live in our social society and cooperate with each others. For instance, scientists have been proved that other source of knowledge only reliable still limit that cannot bright their future as a teacher. All in all, although many source of knowledge available in the world, yet they cannot reach on the teacher's place. That's why students should take help from them but must follow the guidelines of teachers.
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multimedia to know about their academic work than the
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teachers
. It is true that in the previous time
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teacher
played
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very
crucial role
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pupils
gives more preference to
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other
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sources
. To
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begin
with, why
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teachers
are
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important
for
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students
.
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and foremost is that
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pupils
can share feelings with them. If children
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stucks
in any problem
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teachers
can solve their problems at the time or
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clear
the doubts throughout convenient ways as compare to
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other
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source
of
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knowledge
.
For example
, according to 'BBC' survey a
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teacher
is primary
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source
who provides the
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good
example to
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pupils and
they learn
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these education
and become the brilliant person with the
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teachers
teaching method. On the
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other
hand, in the modern era,
mostly
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students
like to
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get
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knowledge
from others
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sources
that's
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good
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because
they can know about various things on one platform
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but
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sometimes
they prone to unreliable things.
As a result
, they cannot achieve their fourth coming goals. On the flip side,
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students
can learn moral values
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only
from
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teachers
that are
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very
necessary for the holistic growth of
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students
. Moral values not
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only
gives fame and fortune
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also
teach about how to
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live
in our social society and cooperate with each
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others
.
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, scientists have
been proved
that
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knowledge
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only
reliable
still
limit that cannot bright their future as a
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teacher
. All in all, although
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many
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source
of
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knowledge
available in the world,
yet
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students
should take
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help
from them
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but
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follow the guidelines of
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.
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IELTS essay In the past teachers were primary source of knowledge. Yet nowadays students have vast source of information, so teachers are no longer necessary in current education.

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