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Discuss about family. With your own opinion.

Discuss about family. With your own opinion. W5Dkq
As you know, the world is changing fast similarly the immediate and extended family and not having face to face interaction with their family members. But, important divorce face to face interaction with their family members and gave time to his/her loving one and spend time with all the member together. In in this essay I will cover all the points of family and will give my opinion. Nowadays, as technology is getting faster likewise our present generation is also not able to give time to their close family members and are busy in their jobs, becoming Independent and trying to to change their lifestyle. This is the main reason for carefree childhood and dysfunctional family because of not able to give time to their children and his/ her close one, which father may become a serious problem and if both of them are having trouble in their relationship, then it might go to a better on mutual divorce, because the children childhood in a trouble. There are some close knit family which stay on good terms with each other because of their mutual understanding and happily married life by making settlement with its right partner by saying apologize to each other and loving them the most among the family member and having feeling of adore love. There are some cases which I personally hear about like having and unrequited love which means one sided love, most as per popular belief they say that in this world every person will be having this type of love in their entire life. In conclusion, I would like to say that you should always give time to your immediate and expanded family for you are as well as your family members enjoy enable and should not eat your adore one and also give time to your children for the development too. The main point you should never disrespect your family member in front of others.
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interaction with their
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.
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interaction with their
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and gave
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to his/her loving one and spend
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with all the
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In in
this essay I will cover all the points of
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family
and will
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my opinion.

Nowadays, as technology is getting faster
likewise
our present generation is
also
not able to
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give
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time
to their close
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family
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members
and are busy in their jobs, becoming Independent and trying
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to to
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change
their lifestyle. This is the main reason for carefree childhood and dysfunctional
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family
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because
of not able to
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give
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time
to their children and his/ her close one, which father may become a serious problem and if both of them are
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having
trouble in their relationship, then it might go to a better on mutual divorce,
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because
the children childhood in a trouble.

There are
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close knit
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which stay on
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good
terms with each other
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because
of their mutual understanding and
happily
married life by making settlement with its right partner by saying apologize to each other and loving them the most among the
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family
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and
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feeling of adore
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. There are
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cases which I
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and unrequited
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which means one sided
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love
, most as per popular belief they say that in this world every person will be
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having
this type of
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love
in their entire life.

In conclusion
, I would like to say that you should always
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give
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time
to your immediate and expanded
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family
for you are
as well
as your
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family
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members
enjoy enable and should not eat your adore one and
also
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give
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time
to your children for the development too. The main point you should never disrespect your
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family
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
member
in front of others.
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IELTS essay Discuss about family. With your own opinion.

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322 words
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