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Traffic congestion solution is offering a free transport system. What is your opinion v.1

Traffic congestion solution is offering a free transport system. What is your opinion v. 1
One of the most pressing issues which needs an effective remedy is road traffic. Some pundits suggested that providing a free-of-charge transport system that runs all day long would help to mitigate the standstill traffic. I totally agree with this suggestion because this will not only decrease the burden on roads, but citizens will also benefit. Perhaps one of the solutions to transport problem is having a mass transportation facility throughout the day with no charge because trains or buses have the ability to convey a significant number of population at the same time. For example, France has had a free urban transportation scheme in action since 2014, and within first days they witnessed the immediate increase in numbers of bus users, and that reflected in the rush hour. Therefore, if the passengers of mass transport increases, road congestion with private vehicles will decrease substantially. The accessibility of a free public transport on will be valued from citizens. This is because commuters would opt for a cheaper alternative as long as an authority can offer them in abundance and they will reach their destination in time. For example, France has extended free bus routes for city dwellers and that decreased the usage of private cars in city centers. Thus, if people dumped their private vehicles and adopted using the mass transport system, the travelling time would not last for long, and they will not pay for their cars fuel and maintenance. In conclusion, I reiterate my view that free urban transport strategy is a viable solution to deal with traffic congestion. It is predicted that more countries would carry out the idea.
One of the most pressing issues which needs an effective remedy is road traffic.
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pundits suggested that providing a free-of-charge
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transport
system that runs all day long would
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help
to mitigate the standstill traffic. I
totally
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agree
with this suggestion
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because
this will not
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only
decrease the burden on roads,
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but
citizens will
also
benefit.

Perhaps one of the solutions to
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transport
problem is having a mass transportation facility throughout the day with no charge
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because
trains or buses have the ability to convey a significant number of population at the same time.
For example
, France has had a
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free
urban transportation scheme in action since 2014, and within
first
days they witnessed the immediate increase in numbers of bus users, and that reflected in the rush hour.
Therefore
, if the passengers of mass
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transport
increases, road congestion with private vehicles will decrease
substantially
.

The accessibility of a
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free
public
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transport
on will
be valued
from citizens. This is
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because
commuters would opt for a cheaper alternative as long as an authority can offer them in
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abundance and
they will reach their destination in time.
For example
, France has extended
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
free
bus routes for city dwellers and that decreased the usage of private cars in city centers.
Thus
, if
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
dumped their private vehicles and adopted using the mass
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
transport
system, the travelling time would not last for long, and they will not pay for their cars fuel and maintenance.

In conclusion
, I reiterate my view that
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free
urban
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transport
strategy is a viable solution to deal with traffic congestion. It
is predicted
that more countries would carry out the
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idea
.
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IELTS essay Traffic congestion solution is offering a free transport system. What is your opinion v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
272 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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