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Traffic and pollution problem to what extent do you ugly or disagree and what other measures do you think might be effective

Traffic and pollution problem to what extent do you ugly or disagree and what other measures do you think might be effective 0w5j5
In modern Times, transportation has become an essential part for all human beings. At that time it is believed that government should improve the rate of petrol for solving the traffic and pollution problems. I completely agree with this view due to two main reasons, This eassy will also discuss other factors, which can be effective to solve this issue. The major reason why I agree with this is that it will reduce the global warming from earth and people can get a fresh air for breathing. However, other people argue that it is not affordable for ordinary people to reach the destination, but I still think that increasing price of a petrol is a battle to solve traffic and pollution problems. If the rate of diesel increasing my authority than people will avoid to use vehicle without any reasons as a result traffic and other problems will be solved and people can live better lifestyle with superior environment. Another reason is that enhance the level of economy. It means that if price for petrol is rising and individuals will use public transport to reach the destination. Community will start using public mode for travelling because it is a cheaper with price. Hence, income will generate for administration and gross domestic product will be increased. For instance, it was served by Germany is that half of the proportion of money collected from public modes in a country from last few decades. However, other sources which can be useful for reducing pollution is that use electric vehicles instead of diesel cars. For that it is a responsibility of a government to increase people. Hence natural resources will be saved for future use and pollution is use can be solved by using environment friendly vehicles. In conclusion, government should increase the rate of petrol because it is a not only reduces the traffic and pollution level but also increase the level of a country's economy. Therefore, I think that it is better to rise a petrol rate for reducing problems, but electric vehicles also helpful for environment.
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is believed
that
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government
should
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improve
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rate
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petrol
for solving the
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traffic
and
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pollution
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problems
. I completely
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agree
with this view due to two main
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reasons
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eassy
will
also
discuss
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other
factors, which can be effective to solve this issue.

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reason
why I
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agree
with this is that it will
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reduce
the global warming from earth and
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people
can
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get
a fresh air for breathing.
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,
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other
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people
argue that it is not affordable for ordinary
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people
to reach the destination,
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but
I
still
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think
that increasing price of a
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petrol
is a battle to solve
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traffic
and
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pollution
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problems
. If the
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rate
of diesel increasing my authority than
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people
will avoid to
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use
vehicle without any
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reasons
as a result
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traffic
and
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problems
will
be solved
and
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people
can
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live
better lifestyle with superior environment.

Another
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reason
is that enhance the level of economy. It means that if price for
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petrol
is rising and individuals will
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use
public transport to reach the destination. Community will
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start
using public mode for travelling
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because
it is a cheaper with price.
Hence
, income will generate for administration and gross domestic product will
be increased
.
For instance
, it
was served
by Germany is that half of the proportion of money collected from public modes in a country from last few decades.

However
,
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other
sources which can be useful for reducing
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pollution
is that
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use
electric vehicles
instead
of diesel cars. For that it is a responsibility of a
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government
to increase
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people
.
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Hence
natural resources will
be saved
for future
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use
and
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pollution
is
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use
can
be solved
by using environment friendly vehicles.

In conclusion
,
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government
should increase the
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rate
of
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petrol
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because
it is a not
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only
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reduces
the
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pollution
level
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but
also
increase the level of a country's economy.
Therefore
, I
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think
that it is better to rise a
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petrol
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rate
for reducing
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problems
,
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but
electric vehicles
also
helpful for environment.
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IELTS essay Traffic and pollution problem to what extent do you ugly or disagree and what other measures do you think might be effective

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