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Traditional music is a vital part of a country's cultural heritage and should be preserved

Traditional music is a vital part of a country's cultural heritage and should be preserved Kll0R

Traditional music means old music of countries that is an essential part of a nation's cultural heritage and history, so I believe it should be protected and identified as a motivating national unity. traditional music can appeal to young people if old generations let them use a modern music instrument like the guitar to produce new melodies and other things. Therefore it can survive for more decades.

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 I believe it should be protected
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 it can survive for more decades. 