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Traditional ideas and young people.

Traditional ideas and young people. Gl0qQ
Being exposed to the time-honored tradition seems to be not enlightened the future of the young generation. I subscribe to the notion that these ideas don't have values for juveniles. opponents are of the belief that their experiences which were gathered throughout the years exert profound and positive influence on the young because they are reliable. This is to say, when the young being in the same situation as older individuals, they will have some prejudice about that, for example, if one gets the ailment by help of the older people they can cure it due to the fact that they experience the same stance and they are aware of that how to counteract with that illness. As a result, relying heavily on the old can increase our life expectancy. However, although the long time ideas from the grand parents are the asset and yielding in better condition, high-tech innovation in technology have vanished their cultural importance. This is to say, the information about everything can be accessed by the internet and social media. As a result, speculation has been fueled that there is no need to take advice from them. In conclusion, social media and the Internet will lead to the demise of the cultural ideas.
Being exposed
to the time-honored tradition seems to be not enlightened the future of the young generation. I subscribe to the notion that these
ideas
don't have values for juveniles.

opponents
are of the belief that their experiences which
were gathered
throughout the years exert profound and
positive
influence on the young
because
they are reliable. This is to say, when the young being in the same situation as older individuals, they will have
some
prejudice about that,
for example
, if one
gets
the ailment by
help
of the older
people
they can cure it due to the fact that they experience the same
stance and
they are aware of that how to counteract with that illness.
As a result
, relying
heavily
on the
old
can increase our life expectancy.

However
, although the long time
ideas
from the grand parents are the asset and yielding in better condition, high-tech innovation in technology have vanished their cultural importance. This is to say, the information about everything can
be accessed
by the internet and social media.
As a result
, speculation has
been fueled
that there is no need to take advice from them.

In conclusion
, social media and the Internet will lead to the demise of the cultural
ideas
.
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IELTS essay Traditional ideas and young people.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
207 words
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