Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Dependent and Independent Individuals

Dependent and Independent Individuals 0pQ15

Nowadays people are becoming more independent than before and all that is due to new lifestyle adopted through using of technology. While there are other individuals are less self-reliant than any point in the past. In my opinion, there exists the possibility to be completely independent. Today, people are more independent especially after the liberating of technology. In the past, individuals who need to do any research, they have to leave their home, interact with others, and engage more with the community, however; now is totally different, they can simply look for any piece of information on their own through the internet. Moreover, users can sign up for educational courses online as well as ordering food by delivery without the need to budge. In the contrary, there are many reasons that make people less independent for many reasons. Considering the traditional importance of being self-reliance, enduring difficult situations, and not requiring the help of others has been replaced with a more progressive outlook the elevates dependence on others. It is normal for men to be more open and reveal the fears and desires, and ask for help. Even social media urges others to seek support through network long-term mental health. To conclude, although many people pursue more independent lifestyle thanks to advances in internet technology, most are now more dependent than ever due to effective shifts in society. Hence, this change has its positives and negatives.

Nowadays You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 are becoming more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withseparatenonpartisansovereignself-sufficientautonomousself-reliant
independent
 than This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 and all that is
 due to new lifestyle adopted through using of technology. While there are You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
 individuals are less self-reliant than any point in the past. In my opinion, there exists the possibility to be completely independent.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
Today
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 are more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withseparatenonpartisansovereignself-sufficientautonomousself-reliant
independent
especially
 after the liberating of technology. In the past, individuals who need to do any research, they This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 their home, interact with others, and engage more with the community, however
; This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 is totally
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
, they can simply
 look for any piece of information on their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 through the internet. Moreover
, users can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :indication
sign
 up for educational courses online as well
 as ordering food by delivery without the need to budge.

In the contrary, there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 reasons that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 less You use this word too often, consider replacing it withseparatenonpartisansovereignself-sufficientautonomousself-reliant
independent
 for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 reasons. Considering the traditional importance of being self-reliance, enduring difficult situations, and not requiring the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of others has been replaced
 with a more progressive outlook the elevates dependence on others. It is normal for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
men
 to be more open and reveal the fears and desires, and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :solicitrequest
ask for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
. Even social media urges others to seek support through network long-term mental health.

To conclude
, although This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 pursue more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withseparatenonpartisansovereignself-sufficientautonomousself-reliant
independent
 lifestyle thanks to advances in internet technology, most are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 more dependent than ever due to effective shifts in society. Hence
, this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 has its positives and negatives. 