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Many people think that having one fixed punishment for all the crimes would be more effective. What are advantages and disadvantages?

Many people think that having one fixed punishment for all the crimes would be more effective. What are advantages and disadvantages? BaxVj

It is advised by individuals to impose a single punishment for each and every crime. It's pros are of a decent concern, regardless it's cons must not be overlooked. It is ideal that if sole punishment is put into order for all the criminal activities the judiciary sector may feel a lot of stress vapoured into thin air, since they would have to give exactly identical charges to every criminal. Firstly, it would save a lot of valuable time during prosecution hence enabling the rapid conclusion of the defaulter. Moreover, a person before infringing rules will think twice as he will already know the consequences. A perfect example for this is Dubai, where such activities have been put down to a mere 5% since the past decade and is rapidly depleting even more. On the other hand, some are not born offenders and sometimes get influenced by pessimistic groups and end up committing small crimes such as pick pocketting, domestic violence, etc. and still face criminal charges similar to that of a murder convict which would be rather unfair because he might learn his lesson by only spending a couple days in the lockup. Therefore, the punishment must be judged on the harshness of crime and both social and financial background of the person. In conclusion, even though an universal punishment may be more efficient and provide better safety it might have unfair consequences on criminals who have been forced to such tasks without taking their personal will in regard.

It is advised
 by individuals to impose a single You use this word too often, consider replacing it withretributiondisciplineforfeituretorturetrialsuffering
punishment
 for each and every crime. It's pros are of a decent concern, regardless it's cons This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 not be overlooked
.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
It
 is ideal that if sole You use this word too often, consider replacing it withretributiondisciplineforfeituretorturetrialsuffering
punishment
is put
 into order for all the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withscandalousillegalunlawfulviciousillegitimatedeplorable
criminal
 activities the judiciary sector may feel This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
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vapoured
 into thin air, since they would This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 give exactly identical charges to every You use this word too often, consider replacing it withscandalousillegalunlawfulviciousillegitimatedeplorable
criminal
. Firstly
, it would save This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 valuable time during prosecution hence
 enabling the rapid conclusion of the defaulter. Moreover
, a person This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 infringing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rules
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 twice as he will already know the consequences. A perfect example for this is Dubai, where such activities have been put
 down to a mere 5% since the past decade and is rapidly
 depleting even more.

On the other hand
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 are not born offenders and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 influenced by pessimistic groups and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 up committing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 crimes such as pick Possible spelling mistake found.pocketingpocket ting
pocketting
, domestic violence, etc. and still
 face You use this word too often, consider replacing it withscandalousillegalunlawfulviciousillegitimatedeplorable
criminal
 charges similar to that of a murder convict which would be rather
 unfair This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 he might learn his lesson by This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 spending a Did you mean "couple of"? (In formal written English 'of' should follow 'couple'.)couple of
couple
 days in the lockup. Therefore
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withretributiondisciplineforfeituretorturetrialsuffering
punishment
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
be judged
 on the harshness of crime and both social and financial background of the person.

In conclusion
, even though
Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'a
an
 universal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withretributiondisciplineforfeituretorturetrialsuffering
punishment
 may be more efficient and provide better safety it might have unfair consequences on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withculpritoffendercrookhooliganfugitivegangster
criminals
 who have been forced
 to such tasks without taking their personal will in regard. 