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Many people think that having one fixed punishment for all the crimes would be more effective. What are advantages and disadvantages?

Many people think that having one fixed punishment for all the crimes would be more effective. What are advantages and disadvantages? BaxVj
It is advised by individuals to impose a single punishment for each and every crime. It's pros are of a decent concern, regardless it's cons must not be overlooked. It is ideal that if sole punishment is put into order for all the criminal activities the judiciary sector may feel a lot of stress vapoured into thin air, since they would have to give exactly identical charges to every criminal. Firstly, it would save a lot of valuable time during prosecution hence enabling the rapid conclusion of the defaulter. Moreover, a person before infringing rules will think twice as he will already know the consequences. A perfect example for this is Dubai, where such activities have been put down to a mere 5% since the past decade and is rapidly depleting even more. On the other hand, some are not born offenders and sometimes get influenced by pessimistic groups and end up committing small crimes such as pick pocketting, domestic violence, etc. and still face criminal charges similar to that of a murder convict which would be rather unfair because he might learn his lesson by only spending a couple days in the lockup. Therefore, the punishment must be judged on the harshness of crime and both social and financial background of the person. In conclusion, even though an universal punishment may be more efficient and provide better safety it might have unfair consequences on criminals who have been forced to such tasks without taking their personal will in regard.
It
is advised
by individuals to impose a single
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punishment
for each and every crime. It's pros are of a decent concern, regardless it's cons
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must
not
be overlooked
.

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It
is ideal that if sole
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punishment
is put
into order for all the
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criminal
activities the judiciary sector may feel
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a lot of
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stress
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vapoured
into thin air, since they would
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have to
give exactly identical charges to every
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criminal
.
Firstly
, it would save
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a lot of
valuable time during prosecution
hence
enabling the rapid conclusion of the defaulter.
Moreover
, a person
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before
infringing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
twice as he will already know the consequences. A perfect example for this is Dubai, where such activities have
been put
down to a mere 5% since the past decade and is
rapidly
depleting even more.

On the other hand
,
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some
are not born offenders and
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sometimes
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get
influenced by pessimistic groups and
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end
up committing
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small
crimes such as pick
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pocketting
, domestic violence, etc. and
still
face
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criminal
charges similar to that of a murder convict which would be
rather
unfair
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because
he might learn his lesson by
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only
spending a
Did you mean "couple of"? (In formal written English 'of' should follow 'couple'.)
couple
days in the lockup.
Therefore
, the
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punishment
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be judged
on the harshness of crime and both social and financial background of the person.

In conclusion
,
even though
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an
universal
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punishment
may be more efficient and provide better safety it might have unfair consequences on
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criminals
who have
been forced
to such tasks without taking their personal will in regard.
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IELTS essay Many people think that having one fixed punishment for all the crimes would be more effective. What are advantages and disadvantages?

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