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Sustainability Commitment

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Despite recent changes in sustainability trends and evaluation from related stakeholders, we have renewed our sustainability commitment since 2 August 2021 to cope long-term goal of sustainable business. We will make sure all of our section business is still on track with the sustainable development goals of 2030. Details on the change of our sustainability commitment are on About Us – Group Commitment.
Despite recent
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changes
in sustainability trends and evaluation from related stakeholders, we have renewed our sustainability commitment since 2 August 2021 to cope long-term goal of sustainable business. We will
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make
sure all of our section business is
still
on
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track
with the sustainable development goals of 2030.
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Details
on the
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of our sustainability commitment are on About Us
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Group Commitment.
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IELTS essay Sustainability Commitment

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
63 words
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