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TPO36briefly summarize the woman's problem. Then state which solution you would recommend. Explain the reasons for your recommendation. v.1

TPO36briefly summarize the woman's problem. Then state which solution you would recommend. Explain the reasons for your recommendation. v. 1
In the recent times the topic of the environmental problems is having a huge impact among the public opinion. While there are people who say the biggest problem will be the extinction of different types of animals and plants, others suggest that the main focus should be given to other central environmental difficulties. In my opinion, the two views are strictly interconnected, and it is impossible to be on one side without being on the other at the same time, since one is the consequence of the other. On the one hand, the former problem regarding the loss of plants and animals has huge implications in different scenarios. Firstly, each creature has a specific role in the ecosystem, and the lack of one of those would result in a break in the chain, with hypothetical catastrophic consequences. As instance, in the scenario of a lack of bees, many types of plants will not be able to reproduce anymore, and the animals who depend on eating these kind of plants will consequently die of starvation. Furthermore, this chain can continue, with the extinction of countless number of animals only because of, as an example, bees. On the other hand, the number of other environmental issues nowadays is huge and increasing in time. Firstly, the global warming and greenhouse gasses can be seen as the root causes of most of the other issues. As an instance, because of these two factors, we are witnessing a fast ice melting at the two poles of our planet, with the consequence of the rising of the water level. Furthermore, this specific threat is not only for animals and plants, but also a huge problem for human beings, because it is likely that most of the coastal cities will soon be underwater. In conclusion, although both views depict real problems, the truth is that the most important environmental problems are a direct cause of the loss of plants and animals. As far as I am concerned, solving the other principals, environmental problems would consequently save plenty of plants and animals, and making the world a better place.
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environmental
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problems
is having a
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huge
impact among the public opinion. While there are
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people
who say the biggest
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problem
will be the extinction of
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different
types of
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animals
and
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plants
, others suggest that the main focus should be
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given
to
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other
central
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environmental
difficulties. In my opinion, the two views are
strictly
interconnected, and it is impossible to be on one side without being on the
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other
at the same time, since one is the consequence of the other.

On the one hand, the former
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problem
regarding the loss of
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plants
and
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animals
has
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huge
implications in
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different
scenarios.
Firstly
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types of
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plants
will not be able to reproduce anymore, and the
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animals
who depend on eating
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plants
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of starvation.
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, this chain can continue, with the extinction of countless number of
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animals
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of, as an example, bees.

On the
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other
hand, the number of
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other
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environmental
issues nowadays is
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huge
and increasing in time.
Firstly
, the global warming and greenhouse gasses can be
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seen
as the root causes of most of the
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other
issues. As an instance,
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because
of these two factors, we are witnessing a
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fast
ice melting at the two poles of our planet, with the consequence of the rising of the water level.
Furthermore
, this specific threat is not
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only
for
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animals
and
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plants
,
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also
a
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huge
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problem
for human beings,
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because
it is likely that most of the coastal cities will
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soon
be underwater.

In conclusion
, although both views depict real
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problems
, the truth is that the most
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important
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environmental
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problems
are a direct cause of the loss of
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plants
and
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animals
. As far as I
am concerned
, solving the
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other
principals,
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environmental
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problems
would
consequently
save
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plenty
of
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plants
and
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animals
, and making the world a better place.
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IELTS essay TPO36briefly summarize the woman's problem. Then state which solution you would recommend. Explain the reasons for your recommendation. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
351 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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