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TPO 6 - task 1: describe a photograph or a painting that is very memorable for your. Explain what you like and dislike about that. v.1

TPO 6 - task 1: describe a photograph or a painting that is very memorable for your. Explain what you like and dislike about that. v. 1
It is quite paradoxical to know if Internet can sound the death knell for newspapers and magazines. I certainly disagree with this belief. In my vision, newspapers and magazines will always thrive even though, there are so many sharks such as the Internet or the Android conquering the digital platform. This essay will describe how the newspapers and magazines thrive against a stiff competition from the Internet. To begin with, the newspapers and magazines are always available from various cities till the countryside. Whereas the internet relies on power supply, formulation of internet service providers and a seamless data connection which are seemingly not possible in the countryside. Further, there are varieties of newspapers based on the content which people prefer to read. For example “The Hindu” covers Domestic and Geopolitics, “The Economic times” covers the stock market movements and the rapid rise and fall of an organisation’s economic pulse. The “Forbes” magazine covers the content on the most successful men or women in this planet and how they have achieved their formidable success. The list goes endlessly in flaunting the print media success, even though the internet took the print media by a storm. However, what made the print media as unconquerable compared to the internet giant? Too much is always too bad. The Internet is vast and endless. When someone searches for fashion in internet, the search goes without any limits. To top it, it further includes the pages that are sometimes not relating to fashion. Most of the times, it causes chaos about the content that one is searching. Consequently, this is the reason why most of the people glued their eyes to the screen content making them doubtful and unsatisfying. Furthermore, there are people who like the touch and feel of paper rather than the touch of a computer mouse. That’s the reason, why schools and universities still follow textbooks as their primary source of education rather than the Internet. To conclude, in better terms, it can appear as newspapers and magazines, lock horns with the Internet and could be losing their dominance. However, that sort of conflict will never happen. In simple terms, the print media offers a finite level of information which is easier to comprehend from the kids till senior citizens. The content in print media content is easy to remain in one’s memory rather than the vast intangible source of information from the Internet.
It is quite paradoxical to know if Internet can sound the death knell for
newspapers
and
magazines
. I
certainly
disagree with this belief. In my vision,
newspapers
and
magazines
will always thrive
even though
, there are
so
many
sharks such as the Internet or the Android conquering the digital platform. This essay will
describe
how the
newspapers
and
magazines
thrive against a stiff competition from the Internet.

To
begin
with, the
newspapers
and
magazines
are always available from various cities till the countryside. Whereas the internet relies on power supply, formulation of internet service providers and a seamless data connection which are
seemingly
not possible in the countryside.
Further
, there are varieties of
newspapers
based on the
content
which
people
prefer to read.
For example
“The Hindu” covers Domestic and Geopolitics, “The Economic times” covers the stock market movements and the rapid rise and fall of an
organisation
’s economic pulse. The “Forbes”
magazine
covers the
content
on the most successful
men
or women in this planet and how they have achieved their formidable success. The list goes
endlessly
in flaunting the
print
media
success,
even though
the internet took the
print
media
by a storm.

However
, what made the
print
media
as unconquerable compared to the internet giant? Too much is always too
bad
. The Internet is vast and endless. When someone searches for fashion in internet, the search goes without any limits. To top it, it
further
includes the pages that are
sometimes
not relating to fashion.
Most of the times
, it causes chaos about the
content
that one is searching.
Consequently
, this is the reason why most of the
people
glued their eyes to the screen
content
making them doubtful and unsatisfying.
Furthermore
, there are
people
who like the touch and feel of paper
rather
than the touch of a computer mouse. That’s the reason, why schools and universities
still
follow textbooks as their primary source of education
rather
than the Internet.

To conclude
, in better terms, it can appear as
newspapers
and
magazines
, lock horns with the Internet and could be losing their dominance.
However
, that sort of conflict will never happen. In simple terms, the
print
media
offers a finite level of information which is easier to comprehend from the kids till senior citizens. The
content
in
print
media
content
is easy to remain in one’s memory
rather
than the vast intangible source of information from the Internet.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay TPO 6 - task 1: describe a photograph or a painting that is very memorable for your. Explain what you like and dislike about that. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
402 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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