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Tpo 43 speaking question 2Some students attend college full-time, while others attend college part-time. Which do you think is better? Explain why. v.1

Tpo 43 speaking question 2Some students attend college full-time, while others attend college part-time. Which do you think is better? Explain why. v. 1
There is no denying that in most of the countries people, especially adolescents prefer to avoid the military service and start thinking to be part of the work force without having any experience or studies. I strongly agree with the idea of having mandatory military service can bring many benefits to the society. I will support this view with arguments and examples in the following paragraphs. Firstly, having the national service as compulsory will help teenagers to have the opportunity to be trained in different aspects such as: team work, working under pressure and to overcome difficult situations, these skills can be more important that technical knowledge when looking for a job, currently companies are looking for staff who are able to tackle difficult situations that happen every day. On the other hand, despite my shared view I believe the mandatory service should be done in a short period of time (not over 1 year), and then give the opportunity to the young people to decide if they want to continue with that career, or if they want to start their studies in another field. In some South American countries for example, most of the teenagers go to the army for just over six months after they have finished their school and after they can start with their university. In conclusion, being in the army is not only about learning how to fight or using special equipment, it is also about learning life lessons to make young people strong and give enough tools to survive any hard situation
There is no denying that in most of the countries
people
,
especially
adolescents prefer to avoid the military
service
and
start
thinking to be part of the work force without having any experience or studies. I
strongly
agree
with the
idea
of having mandatory military
service
can bring
many
benefits to the society. I will support this view with arguments and examples in the following paragraphs.

Firstly
, having the national
service
as compulsory will
help
teenagers
to have the opportunity to
be trained
in
different
aspects such as: team work, working under pressure and to overcome difficult situations, these
skills
can be more
important
that technical knowledge when looking for a job,
currently
companies
are looking for staff who are able to tackle difficult situations that happen every day.

On the other hand
, despite my shared view I believe the mandatory
service
should
be done
in a short period of time (not over 1 year), and then give the opportunity to the young
people
to decide if they want to continue with that career, or if they want to
start
their studies in another field. In
some
South American countries
for example
, most of the
teenagers
go to the army for
just
over six months after they have finished their school and after they can
start
with their university.

In conclusion
, being in the army is not
only
about learning how to fight or using special equipment, it is
also
about learning life lessons to
make
young
people
strong and give
enough
tools to survive any
hard
situation
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Tpo 43 speaking question 2Some students attend college full-time, while others attend college part-time. Which do you think is better? Explain why. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
257 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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