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Some students attend college full time while others attend college part time Which do you think is better Explain why v.1

Some students attend college full time while others attend college part time Which do you think is better Explain why v. 1
Developed communication technology provides various ways to communicate, such as text messaging, Skype chats, instant messaging, which use short forms of many words and even sentences. In my opinion, I disagree with the statement that these tools are reasons to dispel the grammar and spellings. Firstly, online form of communication is mostly used by youngsters and this usage is increased a lot these days, hence parents are more concerned and complaining same blindly. SMS, Chats are basically utilized for informal or casual mode of discussions within friends and family. Definitely it brought new and shorter vocabulary to market, which is derived from the original words keeping them unchanged. This mode is mostly easy and convenient to use and often seen as trending. Long sentences are often abbreviated to type fast and convey messages to another person on chat. This was invented initially because text messages were not allowed to enter characters more than the allowed limit, but became famous very soon. Secondly, Formal communication expects correct grammar and vocabulary. For an illustration, in schools and college students are expected to use formal language to read and write. Another example, in business communicates such as emails, meetings, papers and magazines people are obligatory to utilize the proper language and are refrained to use short and basic form. Text and instant messaging also use pictorial representation to convey messages, which is not allowed in formal conversation. Newspapers and television news channels too uses formal language only. From the arguments stated above, I think that text messaging and similar form of online mode of communication will not bring death of grammar and spellings.
Developed
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messaging, Skype chats, instant messaging, which
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short
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words and even sentences. In my opinion, I disagree with the statement that these tools are reasons to dispel the grammar and spellings.

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form
of
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is
mostly
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used
by youngsters and this usage
is increased
a lot these days,
hence
parents are more concerned and complaining same
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. SMS, Chats are
basically
utilized for informal or casual mode of discussions within friends and family. Definitely it brought new and shorter vocabulary to market, which
is derived
from the original words keeping them unchanged. This mode is
mostly
easy and convenient to
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use
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as trending. Long sentences are
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abbreviated to type
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and convey messages to another person on chat. This
was invented
initially
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because
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text
messages were not
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limit,
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Formal
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correct grammar and vocabulary. For an illustration, in schools and college students are
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expected
to
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language to read and write. Another example, in business communicates such as emails, meetings, papers and magazines
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people
are obligatory to utilize the proper language and
are refrained
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short and basic
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form
.
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Text
and instant messaging
also
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pictorial representation to convey messages, which is not
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allowed
in
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conversation. Newspapers and television news channels too
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uses
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language
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messaging and similar
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of online mode of
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communication
will not bring death of grammar and spellings.
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IELTS essay Some students attend college full time while others attend college part time Which do you think is better Explain why v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
270 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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