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Tpo 2- Q2- Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Agree or disagree? v.2

Tpo 2- Q2- Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Agree or disagree? v. 2
Telling truth has a great impact on our relationships. Everyone has different considerations in his/her own relationships. Some people think that the most important consideration is telling the truth, while others do not. I totally agree that honesty is very important quality in any relation. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay. First of all, telling the truth will develop a strong relationship that last for a long time. Most people strongly feel comfortable to deal with trustworthy persons rather than a person who tells lies. My own experience is a good example to demonstrate this. When I was at my first year in college, one of my friends that I never forget always likes to lie and deceits others. In the beginning, I was dealing with her as a good friend. We spent a lot of time together, studying, shopping and having a lot of fun. I trusted her a lot and began to tell her my secrets. After a while, I discovered that she told my secrets to another friend and when I faced her that I knew what she did, she started to lie to me and create a lot of stories. In addition, I noticed that she did the same thing with another friend. Later, I discovered that she was lying to me all the time as she told me a lot of unreal stories about her life. I broke down my friendship with her just last only for few months. This demonstrates that a strong relationship is built mainly on telling the truth. Moreover, telling the truth will help people to have a less stressful life. Nowadays, most people have their own issues that sometimes stress them and make their life complicated. Some of them have work problems, others have family issues. They do not need to overwhelmed themselves more by having problems to tell the truth. One of my friends usually irritated to tell the truth. She thinks that by doing this, other people will like her more. She always cares to tell people what they want to hear rather than telling the truth and this is a cheating. This makes her under stress all the time, thinking what to say or what a lie to say that makes people like her. All in all, I believe that to have a good relationship, ones should always tell the truth. This is because telling the truth makes our relationship strong and last longer and because it makes our life less stressful.
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, while others do not. I
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agree
that honesty is
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quality in any relation. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.

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First of all
,
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telling
the
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truth
will develop a strong
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relationship
that last for a long
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time
. Most
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people
strongly
feel comfortable to deal with trustworthy persons
rather
than a person who
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tells
lies. My
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own
experience is a
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example to demonstrate this. When I was at my
first
year in college, one of my
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friends
that I never forget always likes to lie and deceits others. In the beginning, I was dealing with her as a
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good
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friend
. We spent a
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lot
of
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time
together, studying, shopping and having a
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lot
of fun. I trusted her a
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lot
and began to
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tell
her my secrets. After a while, I discovered that she
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told
my secrets to another
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friend
and when I faced her that I knew what she did, she
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started
to lie to me and create a
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lot
of stories.
In addition
, I noticed that she did the same thing with another
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friend
. Later, I discovered that she was lying to me all the
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time
as she
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told
me a
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lot
of unreal stories about her
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life
. I broke down my friendship with her
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just
last
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for few months. This demonstrates that a strong
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relationship
is built
mainly
on
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telling
the truth.

Moreover
,
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the
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will
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help
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people
to have a less stressful
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life
. Nowadays, most
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people
have their
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own
issues that
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sometimes
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them and
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complicated.
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of them have work problems, others have family issues. They do not need to overwhelmed themselves more by having problems to
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tell
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truth
. One of my
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friends
usually
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the
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. She
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that by doing this,
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other
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will like her more. She always cares to
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people
what they want to hear
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all the
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, thinking what to say or what a lie to say that
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makes
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people
like her.

All in all, I believe that to have a
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good
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relationship
, ones should always
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tell
the
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truth
. This is
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because
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telling
the
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makes
our
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strong and last longer and
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makes
our
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less stressful.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
59Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Tpo 2- Q2- Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Agree or disagree? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
424 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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