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TPO 19 – Independent: A/D? In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news sources. v.2

TPO 19 – Independent: A/D? In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news sources. v. 2
There are several sources to gain information, such as newspapers, books, magazines, and online sources. Every source itself can be divided into several types as well. In this regard, I prefer to obtain any information from different origins because every source offers a specific aspect of the issue and diversity in information supplies saves the time. In the following paragraphs, I will elaborate on my perspective. Every reporter of an event sides a particular facet which leads one-sidedness for the information sources. That is to say, that is better to refer diverse sources to consider all aspects of the notion and perceive the reality. For instance, a newspaper advocates a political party during an election and the others oppose this party. When you want to choose a suitable and efficient president, it is worth to study all newspapers to know the real information and to vote the accurate person. Diversity in information supplies has caused to achieve many information very quickly. In fact, there are different sources that you can use them based on your conditions. Television and radio programs are at people' s disposal when they are at home. Internet access has eased to find the data swiftly by searching only a few words and to read or watch about an event. Every news source has its own advantages that you can save your time by choosing the correct one. Despite aforementioned ways to be well-informed, we need to limit the news supplies in order to find the information that we need. This means that looking for a scientific, historical, political, or documentary data, or news requires to identify the right and exact type of newspaper, magazine, TV program, or online websites related to the issue. Nevertheless, different sources for every subject will give a perfect picture of the issue. All in all, having a broad knowledge about the subject requires many several news sources since every origin of the news addresses a specific dimension and aspect of the issue, which leads to better understanding of the whole news, and because diverse ways of supplying information save the time spent on achieving the information considering the situations.
There are several
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sources
to gain
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information
, such as
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newspapers
, books, magazines, and online
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sources
. Every
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source
itself can
be divided
into several types
as well
. In this regard, I prefer to obtain any
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information
from
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different
origins
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because
every
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source
offers a specific aspect of the issue and diversity in
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information
supplies saves the time. In the following paragraphs, I will elaborate on my perspective.

Every reporter of an
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event
sides a particular facet which leads
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one-sidedness
for the
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information
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sources
.
That is
to say,
that is
better to refer diverse
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sources
to consider all aspects of the notion and perceive the reality.
For instance
, a
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newspaper
advocates a political party during an election and the others oppose this party. When you want to choose a suitable and efficient president, it is worth to study all
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newspapers
to know the real
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information
and to vote the accurate person.

Diversity in
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information
supplies has caused to achieve
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many
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information
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very
quickly
. In fact, there are
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different
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sources
that you can
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use
them based on your conditions. Television and radio programs are at
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people&
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eased
to find the data
swiftly
by searching
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only
a few words and to read or
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watch
about an
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event
. Every
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news
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source
has its
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own
advantages that you can save your time by choosing the correct one.

Despite aforementioned ways to be well-informed, we need to limit the
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news
supplies in order to find the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
that we need. This means that looking for a scientific, historical, political, or documentary data, or
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
requires to identify the right and exact type of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspaper
, magazine, TV program, or online websites related to the issue.
Nevertheless
,
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different
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sources
for every subject will give a perfect picture of the issue.

All in all, having a broad knowledge about the subject requires
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many
several
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news
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sources
since every origin of the
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news
addresses a specific dimension and aspect of the issue, which leads to better understanding of the whole
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news
, and
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because
diverse ways of supplying
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information
save the time spent on achieving the
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information
considering the situations.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
30Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay TPO 19 – Independent: A/D? In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news sources. v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
358 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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