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Tourism is always a force for good which enable people of different country to understand each other.

Tourism is always a force for good which enable people of different country to understand each other. OV6X7
Tourist is the best option to meet new peoples of different country. Everyone wants to explore the world. I agree with the statement that to learn and understand different person you will have to keep travel. In this essay I will explain that how travel can helpful for your development. When you travel to another nation you met with all different types of person who belongs to others communities. Their social life, culture and language are different. We can learn these things from them. Apart from this we also can learn some development planning from their history that how they have developed their provinces. We can apply all this in our personal as professional life both. Every individual who is alike from you, we can add some good values from them in our life. Moreover, every nation has some expertise in their specific field. We should meet them and understand about their way of living, a way of thinking and some rituals also. It can help us to develop our mind. We can learn some traffic sense from one state and from other one we can learn about cleaning. Additionally, we also can explore our cultures, thought, rituals and language. In both ways we can understand to each other. Tourist industry helps to grow the economy of the nation. To conclude, in my point of view tourism is very essential for all the nation and everyone should visit any nation basis on their interest to understand new policies, art, lifestyle. It can add more values to all individuals.
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that how travel can helpful for your development.

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When
you travel to another
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nation
you met with all
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different
types of person who belongs to others communities. Their social life, culture and language are
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different
. We can
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learn
these things from them. Apart from this we
also
can
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learn
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some
development planning from their history that how they have developed their provinces. We can apply all this in our personal as professional life both. Every individual who is alike from you, we can
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add
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some
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good
values from them in our life.

Moreover
, every
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nation
has
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some
expertise in their specific field. We should
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meet
them and
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understand
about their way of living, a way of thinking and
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rituals
also
. It can
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help
us to develop our mind. We can
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learn
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some
traffic sense from one state and from other one we can
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learn
about cleaning.
Additionally
, we
also
can explore our cultures,
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thought
, rituals and language. In both ways we can
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understand
to each other. Tourist industry
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helps
to grow the economy of the nation.

To conclude
, in my point of view tourism is
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very
essential for all the
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nation
and everyone should visit any
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nation
basis on their interest to
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understand
new policies, art, lifestyle. It can
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add
more values to all individuals.
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IELTS essay Tourism is always a force for good which enable people of different country to understand each other.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
258 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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