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Это может вызвать серьезные социальные проблемы, а также практические проблемы. В какой степени вы согласны или не согласны?

Это может вызвать серьезные социальные проблемы, а также практические проблемы. В какой степени вы согласны или не согласны? AjJN1
A man who loves in a country which is located abroad of his Homeland can catch some difficulties, due to lack of undetstanding the language of the society. I partially disagree with this notion. In the following paragraphs I shall put forth my argument to support my point of view. There are several reasons why I choose the life abroad. Firstly, almost forty percent of the humanity think that without any skills of speaking in a foreign language, they cannot keep living in the international Republics. However, to put it simply I know a woman who lives in Argentina approximately a year, while she departed Tashkent she had not known anything about tongues. In spite of this, a few times later the alien of the Argentina talked calmly on this language. There are lots of people who are not able to learn a foreign tongue even if it takes them many years. Of course, it depends on the interest and persist in of studying. In fact, that the complications of the life, study us to be correct. I mean, residing farther than Motherland cause serious issues, but it teaches us to solve problems ourselves we get used to self-care. Moreover, there is the best thing which will appreciate everyone is the gestures. Gesture is the visual signals which send to an onlooker. Every nation has own comprehension of movement. For example, a hand purse gesture, carries various meanings in different countries. In France it means «i am afraid», but in American culture, it has no clear meaning. To sum up, I prefer to inhabit and be aware a lot of about other countries which increases horizons and the gift of tongue rather than lead a sedentary lifestyle which on the contrary that cause serious problems.
A
man
who
loves
in a country which
is located
abroad of his Homeland can catch
some
difficulties, due to lack of
undetstanding
the language of the society. I
partially
disagree with this notion. In the following paragraphs I shall put forth my argument to support my point of view.

There are several reasons why I choose the life abroad.
Firstly
, almost forty percent of the humanity
think
that without any
skills
of speaking in a foreign language, they cannot
keep
living in the international Republics.
However
, to put it
simply
I know a woman who
lives
in Argentina approximately a year, while she departed Tashkent she had not known anything about tongues.
In spite of
this, a few times later the alien of the Argentina talked
calmly
on this language. There are lots of
people
who are not able to learn a foreign tongue even if it takes them
many
years.
Of course
, it depends on the interest and persist in of studying.

In fact, that the complications of the life, study us to be correct. I mean, residing farther than Motherland cause serious issues,
but
it teaches us to solve problems ourselves we
get
used
to self-care.
Moreover
, there is the best thing which will appreciate everyone is the gestures. Gesture is the visual signals which
send
to an onlooker. Every nation has
own
comprehension of movement.
For example
, a hand purse gesture, carries various meanings in
different
countries. In
France it
means «
i
am afraid»,
but
in American culture, it has no
clear
meaning.

To sum up, I prefer to inhabit and be aware
a lot of
about other countries which increases horizons and the gift of tongue
rather
than lead a sedentary lifestyle which
on the contrary
that cause serious problems.
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IELTS essay Это может вызвать серьезные социальные проблемы, а также практические проблемы. В какой степени вы согласны или не согласны?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
295 words
6.0
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