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Tourism has increased cause of inconvenience for local people and environment but others think that it brings benefits for country economy

Tourism has increased cause of inconvenience for local people and environment but others think that it brings benefits for country economy mWnV8
Tourism is a good way to find out more about different countries with different traditions and customs. Some tourists prefer to spend in one country just a few days or one day and then leave for another country. This way of travelling allows people to visit more countries in less days. This industry has been progressing for about 50 years. Today this sphere differs from other ranges which means it is the most persistent activity in the world. Tourism being one of the biggest and fastest growing industries globally, its benefits and the challenges keenly observed by governments affects the economic socio- cultural, enviromental and educational recources of nations. The positive effects of tourism on a country's economy include the growth and development of various industries ditectly linked with a healthy tourism industry such as transportation, accommodation, wildlife, arts and entertainment. This brings about the creation of new jobs and revenue generated from foreign exchange, investments and payments of goods and services provided. However, it affected environment and natural areas badly which caused to extinct uncommon plants. The environment can be greatly affected by tourism in cases where the attraction is a vista of nature's beauty, visits of people in large numbers could mean huge amounts of treading and pollution of materials such as plastic waste, bottles, which in the long run could be disruptive to the habitats of both faunal and floral life. Advantage of this sector makes a lot of money to support educational system and governments' other forks. In summary, I will surely approve of tourism industry if they affect less.
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way to find out more about
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different
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countries
with
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different
traditions and customs.
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tourists prefer to spend in one
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country
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just
a few days or one day and then
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leave
for another
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country
. This way of travelling
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allows
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people
to visit more
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countries
in
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less
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industry
has been progressing for about 50 years.
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Today
this sphere differs from other ranges which means it is the most persistent activity in the world.
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Tourism
being one of the biggest and fastest growing
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industries
globally, its benefits and the challenges
keenly
observed by
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governments
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enviromental
and educational
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recources
of nations. The
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positive
effects of
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tourism
on a country's economy include the growth and development of various
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industries
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ditectly
linked with a healthy
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tourism
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industry
such as transportation, accommodation, wildlife, arts and entertainment. This brings about the creation of new jobs and revenue generated from foreign exchange, investments and payments of
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goods
and services provided.
However
, it
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affected
environment and natural areas
badly
which caused to extinct uncommon plants. The environment can be
greatly
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affected
by
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tourism
in cases where the attraction is a vista of nature's beauty, visits of
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people
in large numbers could mean huge amounts of treading and pollution of materials such as plastic waste, bottles, which in the long run could be disruptive to the habitats of both
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faunal
and floral life. Advantage of this sector
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makes
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a lot of
money to support educational system and
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governments
' other forks. In summary,

I will
surely
approve of
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tourism
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industry
if they affect less.
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IELTS essay Tourism has increased cause of inconvenience for local people and environment but others think that it brings benefits for country economy

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
264 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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