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describe the proposed changes for local committee

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The given pictures show the proposal about new street plan on Foster Road between SE 84th and 85th Avenue for local committee. Overall, the proposed changes for the street brings more comfortable, greener and safer environment for people to enjoy walking and biking on the street. Firstly, the sidewalks for pedestrians will be wider then before so that people without vehicle can also enjoy using the street without walking on the same lanes for cars. Moreover, there will be implemented a new zebra crossing with a island at the middle of the street for people to cross the street safer then before. Secondly, both sides of the street will cut off a lanes for vehicle and change with a new lanes special for bicycles. Therefore, it can also encourage people to use bicycle more for commuting instead of driving. Additionally, there will be implemented street trees on both side of the street for pedestrians and people cycling to have a lovely shade

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