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Rubbish is increasing at rapid pace. Why this happening and what should be done to solve this.

Rubbish is increasing at rapid pace. Why this happening and what should be done to solve this. p58n3
In recent decades, rubbish becomes a controversial issue among public across the globe as it leads to various complications which only curbed through implementing different solutions which i will discussed in upcoming paragraphs. To embark on, there are multifarious reasons that why waste is surging at high pace. On the bottom, folks using those things that can spoil the environment such as polithyne, plastic bags, bottles, cans they use and throw them at public places leading to different dangerous obstacles such as malaria, flu, cancer etc. Also, it affects not only health but environment too. For example, it is witnessed from past records that 50% masses throw waste from their homes in huge amount created cancer as well as malaria across the all country in UK over 4 years ago. Moreover, in the urban and rural areas where animals living their life in unusual places can eat waste which can be horrible situation for them because it sometimes leads to death and long run diseases. They may feel difficulty in eating food or drink water due to this headache. Adding more, with the advancement in technology, many factories, industries manufacturing new products everyday and utilize chemicals and things made of plastic to make their products much valuable and convenient leads to another health problems and also not affects environment but creates noise and air pollution too. On the other hand, there are manifold solutions to solve this can of worms. First of all, government should apply policy called 3R's which is reuse, recycle and reduce on population to make surrounding neat and clean. This will helps human to keep their environment safe and fresh. Another solution could be developing a habit of use dustbins which contains waste things and authorities must keep dustbins around the cities and towns. Last but not the least, supervision should allow to use simple bags instead of plastic bags and they should avoid these bags which could be harmful movement for whole planet. They should broadcast programs that aware crowd about wrong and right things on TV, radio and internet. In conclusion, although, rubbish has its own merits and demerits but disadvantages are more than advantages as i have mentioned above. Cabinet should take steps toward this headache.
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To embark on, there are multifarious reasons that why
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waste
is surging at high pace. On the bottom, folks using those things that can spoil the
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environment
such as
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polithyne
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bags
, bottles, cans they
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use
and throw them at public places leading to
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different
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obstacles such as malaria, flu, cancer etc.
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, it affects not
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health
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too.
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from past records that 50% masses throw
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waste
from their homes in huge amount created cancer
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as malaria across the all country in UK over 4 years ago.

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waste
which can be horrible situation for them
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leads to death and long run diseases. They may feel difficulty in eating food or drink water due to this headache. Adding more, with the advancement in technology,
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many
factories, industries manufacturing new products
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and utilize chemicals and things made of plastic to
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their products much valuable and convenient leads to another health problems and
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environment
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creates noise and air pollution too.

On the other hand
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should apply policy called 3R's which is reuse, recycle and
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reduce
on population to
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surrounding neat and clean. This will
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their
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safe and fresh. Another solution could be developing a habit of
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dustbins which contains
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things and authorities
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dustbins around the cities and towns. Last
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simple
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they should avoid these
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which could be harmful movement for whole planet. They should broadcast programs that aware crowd about
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and right things on TV, radio and internet.

In conclusion
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merits and demerits
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disadvantages are more than advantages as
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have mentioned above. Cabinet should take steps toward this headache.
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IELTS essay Rubbish is increasing at rapid pace. Why this happening and what should be done to solve this.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
373 words
6.0
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