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My job description as I can see it

My job description as I can see it D6rPp
In this essay, I want to describe the relationship between employees and a company at my current workplace and my point of view towards it. My current company is relatively small. Therefore it is very agile in a lot of aspects. All head managers are not far away from employees and as a result, almost any aspect can be negotiable at any point in time. We don't have set in stone rules about work time, duties, responsibilities, and how to discuss salary. It feels like not working for someone but more like a collaboration of self-employed people looking forward to the same goals and achievements. This approach is not ideal and has some controversial features. For instance, some people may not like to reschedule their plans if something urgent is required, and some may be unsatisfied to be responsible for broad types of things. I like this attitude and the experience I got from it.
In this essay, I want to
describe
the relationship between employees and a
company
at my
current
workplace and my point of view towards it.

My
current
company
is
relatively
small
.
Therefore
it is
very
agile in
a lot of
aspects. All head managers are not far away from employees and
as a result
, almost any aspect can be negotiable at any point in time. We don't have set in stone
rules
about work time, duties, responsibilities, and how to discuss salary. It feels like not working for someone
but
more like a collaboration of self-employed
people
looking forward to the same goals and achievements. This approach is not ideal and has
some
controversial features.
For instance
,
some
people
may not like to reschedule their plans if something urgent
is required
, and
some
may
be unsatisfied
to be responsible for broad types of things.

I like this attitude and the experience I
got
from it.
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IELTS essay My job description as I can see it

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
155 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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