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More and more people spend in free time watching movie. Its's bad or good things.

More and more people spend in free time watching movie. Its's bad or good things. NmeL0

Many People ought to spend time in free timetable. In present people thing in free time watching a movie it's bad idea, but other peoples thing that it's good time in family. However, peoples have to prefer spend time with family in weekend, because many people worked in job sector or business. Many people having time watching a movie in mid-night, because people became from office at 8: 30 p. m. In addition to, people prefer watching in social movie, so that

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
Many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
People
 ought to spend You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 in free timetable. In present You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 thing in free You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 watching a movie it's This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 other Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "peoples'" or "people's"?peoples'people's
peoples
 thing that it's This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 in family. However
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
peoples
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 prefer spend You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 with family in weekend, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 worked in job sector or business.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
Many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 having You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 watching a movie in mid-night, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 became from office at 8: 30 p. m. In addition
 to, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 prefer watching in social movie, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphthat.that!that?that:that,that;
that