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Topic - Present worth of human

Topic - Present worth of human JKDrD
A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. I feel this is partially true, it also depends on the situation. I remember a real life story told by author Sudha Murthy. She was once travelling to Delhi for work and on the airport, she was ill treated by a co-passenger who was travelling to the same place. This was because of her get up, as she was in a traditional attire wearing a saree, she was looked down upon. Sudha was thought to be illeterate and of lower class just by her appearance by one of the co-passengers. But Sudha didn't utter a word in her defence, strangely she just smiled and walked away. Next day in Delhi Sudha had to go for a book launch functution where she was the guest of honor. There were many big personalities present from the industry. The location was top notch decorated in a fancy way with all the glitter and glammer. There was Sudha walking towards the stage with poise, she was beautifully draped in a saree. Everyone was held in her awe and simplicity. Here at the same function was the co-passenger who had brutally behaved with Sudha. As she realised that the old fashioned lady was none other than 'The Sudha Murthy' it was a bit too late. Sudha addressed the audience and as she walked back to her place the co-passenger stopped her and apologised for the brutal behaviour. Sudha accepted the apology with grace and made her realise how appearances are deceptive and one should not be judged on their social status or material possessions.
A person's worth nowadays seems to
be judged
according to social status and material possessions. I feel this is
partially
true, it
also
depends on the situation. I remember a real life story
told
by author
Sudha
Murthy
. She was once travelling to Delhi for work and on the airport, she was
ill treated
by a co-passenger who was travelling to the same place. This was
because
of her
get
up, as she was in a traditional attire wearing a saree, she
was looked
down upon.
Sudha
was
thought
to be
illeterate
and of lower
class
just
by her appearance by one of the co-passengers.
But
Sudha
didn't utter a word in her
defence
,
strangely
she
just
smiled and walked away.
Next
day in Delhi
Sudha
had to go for a book launch
functution
where she was the guest of honor. There were
many
big
personalities present from the industry. The location was
top notch
decorated
in a fancy way
with all the glitter and
glammer
. There was
Sudha
walking towards the stage with poise, she was
beautifully
draped in a saree. Everyone
was held
in her awe and simplicity.

Here at the same function was the co-passenger who had
brutally
behaved with
Sudha
.
As
she
realised
that the
old fashioned
lady was none other than 'The
Sudha
Murthy
' it was a bit too late.

Sudha
addressed the audience and as she walked back to her place the co-passenger
stopped
her and
apologised
for the brutal
behaviour
.
Sudha
accepted
the apology with grace and made her
realise
how appearances are deceptive and one should not
be judged
on their social status or material possessions.
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IELTS essay Topic - Present worth of human

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
274 words
5.5
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