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Topic: Most people these days, online to reading newspapers or Is it a positive on regolure qualche

Topic: Most people these days, online to reading newspapers or Is it a positive on regolure qualche Mr939
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news
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people
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IELTS essay Topic: Most people these days, online to reading newspapers or Is it a positive on regolure qualche

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
174 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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