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Most people these days newspapers or dus it positive or negative development. watching or getting news online to reading

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IELTS essay Most people these days newspapers or dus it positive or negative development. watching or getting news online to reading

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
237 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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