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tell about your hometown. what do tou like about it?

tell about your hometown. what do tou like about it? PRoXX
I am quite enthusiastic about telling my hometown - Buon Ma Thuot City where belongs to Dak Lak provine. It places in the central highlands of Viet Nam. Buon Ma Thuot is famous of coffee, it considers as a capital of coffee. We have coffee festival and it is organised every two years. Besides, I am really into talking about the elephants, that is our striking feature and the elephants will be paraded in coffee festival. And thing that is indespensable is food. We have dishes must eat such as clam rice, sticky white rice that’s been stuffed into bamboo and grilled, nem nuong Dak Lak is a melting pot, we have many ethnicities that become multiculturalism, especially gong culture and long stilt houses of ethnic minorities, that is signiture of my hometown. When you travel to Buon Ma Thuot city, you can experience many beautiful scenes. We have many waterfalls, lakes, moutains that you can immerse yourself in nature. So I want to my hometown is more developing to knowing for and visit beautiful Buon Ma Thuot. I love and want to live here my full life. Include, I am pretty keen on recommending my hometown is a good place to live. The cost living is suitable for people who have a mid-range income and the weather is very pleasant, not too hot and cold. I am quite a big fan of my hometown.
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Ma
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Thuot
City where belongs to
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Dak
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Lak
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provine
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Ma
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Thuot
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coffee
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. We have
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festival and it is
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organised
every two years.
Besides
, I am
really
into talking about the elephants,
that is
our striking feature and the elephants will
be paraded
in
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festival. And thing
that is
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indespensable
is food. We have dishes
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eat such as clam rice, sticky white rice that’s
been stuffed
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nem
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nuong


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Dak
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Lak
is a melting pot, we have
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ethnicities that become multiculturalism,
especially
gong culture and long stilt
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houses
of ethnic minorities,
that is
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signiture
of my
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. When you travel to
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Buon
Ma
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Thuot
city, you can experience
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scenes. We have
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many
waterfalls, lakes,
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moutains
that you can immerse yourself in nature.
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So
I want to my
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is more developing to knowing for and visit
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Buon
Ma
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Thuot
. I
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love
and want to
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live
here my full life. Include, I am pretty keen on recommending my
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hometown
is a
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good
place to
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live
. The cost living is suitable for
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people
who have a mid-range income and the weather is
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very
pleasant, not too hot and
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cold
. I am quite a
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big
fan of my
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IELTS essay tell about your hometown. what do tou like about it?

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