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spending free time in outside

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In my opinion, spending free time outside is better than inside, because it is good for my health and I can breathe in the fresh air. I like cycling and playing badminton in the park. In addition, it makes me relax and learn more things. For example, I usually have a picnic with my friends and they tell me many useful stories about their life. Furthermore, spending free time outside also helps me be more open-minded and enthusiastic. It helps me to know mAny new things around. This is why I prefer spending my free time outside.

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