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TOPIC : many people say that cooking and eating healthily is better for health than consuming ready meals ( fast food ) to what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

TOPIC: many people say that cooking and eating healthily is better for health than consuming ready meals ( fast food ) with this statement? EqN2r
" Food " which is the essential source, impacts on human life directly. There has been commonly assumed that home made meals are a optimal choice for individual's health than junk food whereas others argue the contrary perspective. From my point of view, I'm completely agree with this statement Ready meals that make both metal and physical health become worsen. first of all, it influences on the physical health seriously. As a matter of fact, fast foods contain massive amount of toxic ingredients and chemistry substances that have negative effect on health. . As a result, after a long time people consistently use fast food products they tend to be prone to some diseases such as obesity, diabetes. Another disadvantage of instant food is that it causes some problems relating to psychology. According to recent research, people who are overweight tend to suffer from depression and even their life span decreases On the other hand, prepared meal bring us many benefits in boosting our health. The main reason i can mention is that when people stand a chance cooking a meal by themselves, they have more control over what they are putting into their body. Given that they know their health status and have reasonable adjustment that enable their physical health to maintain better. The second reason is to help people remain the positive thinking. In reality, people are bombarded with over workload and consistent deadline that means they are under immense pressure. given that, cooking at home is consider as a way of relaxing and relieve their stress after an exhausted day. To illustration, an increasing number culinary courses attract a lot of attention from people of all ages. In conclusion, healthy meals has been being the indispensable factor toward human's health. I personally feel that each individual should take responsibility for enhancing consciousness about junk food and limit it as well as learn more cooking recipes.
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"
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Food
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"
which is the essential source, impacts on human life
directly
. There has been
commonly
assumed that home made
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meals
are
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
optimal choice for individual's
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health
than junk
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
whereas others argue the contrary perspective. From my point of view, I'm completely
Consider using a past participle here: "agreed".
agree
with this statement

Ready
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meals
that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
both metal and physical
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health
become worsen.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
first of all
, it influences on the physical
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
health
seriously
. As a matter of fact,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
fast
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foods
contain massive amount of toxic ingredients and chemistry substances that have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
effect on
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health
.
Don't put a space before the full stop
.
As a result
, after a long time
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people
consistently
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
fast
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food
products they tend to be prone to
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some
diseases such as obesity, diabetes. Another disadvantage of instant
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food
is that it causes
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
problems relating to psychology. According to recent research,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
who are overweight tend to suffer from depression and even their life span
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decreases


On the other hand
, prepared
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meal
bring us
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many
benefits in boosting our
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health
. The main reason
Did you mean "I"?
i
can mention is that when
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
stand a chance cooking a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meal
by themselves, they have more control over what they are putting into their body.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Given
that they know their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
health
status and have reasonable adjustment that enable their physical
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
health
to maintain better. The second reason is to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
remain the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
thinking. In reality,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
are bombarded
with over workload and consistent deadline that means they are under immense pressure.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
given
that, cooking at home is
Consider using a past participle here: "considered".
consider
as a way of relaxing and relieve their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stress
after an exhausted day. To illustration, an increasing number culinary courses attract
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
attention from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
of all ages.

In conclusion
, healthy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meals
has been being the indispensable factor toward human's
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
health
. I
personally
feel that each individual should take responsibility for enhancing consciousness about junk
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
and limit it
as well
as learn more cooking recipes.
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IELTS essay TOPIC: many people say that cooking and eating healthily is better for health than consuming ready meals ( fast food ) with this statement?

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
318 words
5.5
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