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Factors that contribute success in learning a new language

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There are several factors that contribute to the successful in learning a new language: critical period, evironment, attitude and motivation. The best time for adopting a new language is when you were a kid, a kid can learn a new language much more easier. Beside critical period, evironment is also a key to learning languages. You will improve your english better if you are surrounded by people who speak english every day. Our attitude can affect our english skill. For instance, if you do not mind to make mistakes, you will become more confident to speak english. And the final factor is motivation.
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IELTS essay Factors that contribute success in learning a new language

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