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There are still countries where the parents choose to send their children to single-gender schools

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Single-gender or co-educational school? Years are passing, however, several individuals consider that young society going to single-sex schools affect positively the future of students. . I completely disagree with this belief due to the fact it will have a positive effect on students future life in two main areas. First and foremost, attending a mono-sexual institution will cause its attendees to have a poor social relationship with the opposite sex as they grow and come in contact with them. This is since one or another person will not have the opportunity to have communication with the opposite sex. Based on this, problems may arise when contacting the opposite sex in the future. A mature will not be able to make contact, which can deprive him of many opportunities both in his personal life and in terms of career and professional growth. This brings me to the second point. On the one hand, there are also advantages to studying in a single-sex school. Let's take as an example that boys, like girls, will be able to freely express their thoughts and be frank in everything since they will not have to blush for their words or deeds. However, this can lead to very big disagreements between the sexes. Moreover, the opposite sex will have very little experience and knowledge concerning each other. Thus, studying at a single-gender school is not a very good start in the life of every future successful person. To summarize my thoughts, I would like to remind you that one should not ignore the fact that if children study in single-sex schools, it has will have disadvantages. However, it has also advantages. It's just that the disadvantages that exist can lead the opposite sex to many significant problems in life, such as problems in professional growth as well as in life, or worse, to the small amount of experience in communicating with the other sex. Nevertheless, scholars should be m
Single-gender or co-educational
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school
? Years are passing,
however
, several individuals consider that young society going to single-sex
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schools
affect
positively
the
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future
of students.
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.
I completely disagree with this belief due to the fact it will have a
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positive
effect on students
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future
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life
in two main areas.

First
and foremost, attending a mono-sexual institution will cause its attendees to have a poor social relationship with the
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opposite
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sex
as they grow and
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come
in contact with them. This is since one or another person will not have the opportunity to have communication with the
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opposite
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sex
. Based on this, problems may arise when contacting the
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opposite
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sex
in the
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future
. A mature will not be able to
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make
contact, which can deprive him of
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many
opportunities both in his personal
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life
and in terms of career and professional growth.

This brings me to the second point. On the one hand, there are
also
advantages to studying in a single-sex
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school
.
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Let
's take as an example that boys, like girls, will be able to
freely
express their thoughts and be frank in everything since they will not
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have to
blush for their words or deeds.
However
, this can lead to
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very
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big
disagreements between the
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sexes
.
Moreover
, the
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opposite
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sex
will have
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very
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little
experience and knowledge concerning each other.
Thus
, studying at a single-gender
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is not a
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very
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good
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start
in the
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life
of every
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future
successful person.

To summarize
my thoughts, I would like to remind you that one should not
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ignore
the fact that if children study in single-sex
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schools
, it has will have disadvantages.
However
, it has
also
advantages. It's
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just
that the disadvantages that exist can lead the
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opposite
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sex
to
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many
significant problems in
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life
, such as problems in professional growth
as well
as in
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life
, or worse, to the
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small
amount of experience in communicating with the other
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sex
.
Nevertheless
, scholars should be m
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IELTS essay There are still countries where the parents choose to send their children to single-gender schools

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  American English
4 paragraphs
322 words
6.0
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