TOPIC: Imagine that you plan to donate money to charity to help people in need. If you could give money toonly one type of charitable organization, which one of the following would you choose and why? - An organization that provides food and housing to peo v.1
TOPIC: Imagine that you plan to donate money to charity to help people in need. If you could give money toonly one type of charitable organization, which one of the following would you choose and why? - An organization that provides food and housing to peo v. 1
Human beings are members of a whole, created from one essence and soul. That is a poem from one of the most famous Persian poets, Sa' adi, which states that all people are created the same, and if one person is in a poor condition, all other humans are in the same condition. That is why we have a solemn obligation to help other people who are in need. The important question that arises regarding this issue is how we should help the people in need. Should we provide them with the food, housing, free medical care; or we should help them to start their own small businesses? I firmly believe helping needy people to start their own business is more beneficial, and it what follows, I will elaborate on the most important reasons.
The first reason is that I deeply believe instead of giving fish to people in need, we have to help them do the fishing on their own. If you provide food and housing for needy people, while they do not have a decent job, they will not be able to start living on their own. I believe there are people who are intelligent and motivated, but they do not have enough money to start their own business. By giving money to these people, they will be able to provide food and housing for their family, and they will help other poor people by providing them job opportunities. There was a man who lived in our neighborhood, and did not have anything in his life. He lived with his wife and his two little girls, in a very old house. The people in the neighborhood decided to give him some money, to help him start his own business. He started by fixing other people' s shoes in the street, and after several years, through hard work and perseverance, he now has his own shop, which is small, but has a very good income.
Furthermore, by providing housing, food, or medical care for people in need, we will make them more dependent, and they will lose their will to work and live on their own. I believe they will think that other people will give them something to eat, someplace to spend their night in, eventually. In this way, we will help them survive, but they will be in the same condition for the rest of their lives. Their children will not have a proper education, which is an essential need in today' s world, and it is obvious that without having a good education, and without having money to start a career, their children will not be able to have a decent job in the future, and consequently, next generations of poor people will be produced.
To make a long story short, I firmly believe that instead of providing housing, food or medical care for the poor people, we should help them to start their own business. Not only will it help them to survive, it will help them stand on their own feet and prosper in life. I believe by providing food and other similar helps, future generations of poor people will be produced.
Human beings are members of a whole, created from one essence and soul.
That is
a poem from one of the most
famous
Persian poets,
Sa&
#039;
adi
, which states that all
people
are created
the same, and if one person is in a
poor
condition, all
other
humans are in the same condition.
That is
why we have a solemn obligation to
help
other
people
who are in
need
. The
important
question that arises regarding this issue is how we should
help
the
people
in
need
. Should we provide them with the
food
, housing, free medical care; or we should
help
them to
start
their
own
small
businesses
? I
firmly
believe
helping needy
people
to
start
their
own
business
is more beneficial, and it what follows, I will elaborate on the most
important
reasons.
The
first
reason is that I
deeply
believe
instead
of giving fish to
people
in
need
, we
have to
help
them do the fishing on their
own
. If you provide
food
and housing for needy
people
, while they do not have a decent job, they will not be able to
start
living on their
own
. I
believe
there are
people
who are intelligent and motivated,
but
they do not have
enough
money
to
start
their
own
business
. By giving
money
to these
people
, they will be able to provide
food
and housing for their family, and they will
help
other
poor
people
by providing them job opportunities. There was a
man
who
lived
in our neighborhood, and did not have anything in his life. He
lived
with his wife and his two
little
girls, in a
very
old
house
. The
people
in the neighborhood decided to give him
some
money
, to
help
him
start
his
own
business
. He
started
by fixing
other
people&
#039; s shoes in the street, and after several years, through
hard
work and perseverance, he
now
has his
own
shop, which is
small
,
but
has a
very
good
income.
Furthermore
, by providing housing,
food
, or medical care for
people
in
need
, we will
make
them more dependent, and they will lose their will to work and
live
on their
own
. I
believe
they will
think
that
other
people
will give them something to eat, someplace to spend their night in,
eventually
. In this way, we will
help
them survive,
but
they will be in the same condition for the rest of their
lives
. Their children will not have a proper education, which is an essential
need
in
today&
#039; s world, and it is obvious that without having a
good
education, and without having
money
to
start
a career, their children will not be able to have a decent job in the future, and
consequently
,
next
generations of
poor
people
will
be produced
.
To
make
a long story short, I
firmly
believe
that
instead
of providing housing,
food
or medical care for the
poor
people
, we should
help
them to
start
their
own
business
. Not
only
will it
help
them to survive, it will
help
them stand on their
own
feet and prosper in life. I
believe
by providing
food
and
other
similar
helps
, future generations of
poor
people
will
be produced
.
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