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The line graph illustrates the wheat exportation of three areas, namely Australia, Canada and European Community from 1985 to 1990. Overall, the wheat export in Australia decreased over time while the export in Canada and European countries saw an upward trend with some fluctuations. It is noticeable to see that Canada had the highest oscillations throughout the period. Initially, in 1985, Canada exported the highest quatity of wheat which approximately 19 million tons. Subsequently, in the next year, it decreased slightly to about 17 million tons before it significantly increased in the following two years, reaching 25 million tons in 1988, which is the peak of the whole period. However, it plunged by 11 million tons from 25 million tons in 1988 to under 15 million tons in 1989. After that, it settled to 20 million tons at the end of the period. The European countries exported approximately 17. 5 million tons of wheat in 1985 and the export fell under 15 million tons in 1986. Then, it rose to 15 million tons in the subsequent year and remained steady in 1988. EU’s wheat export surged in the next two years and in the last year of period, their wheat export was more than 20 million tons. On the other hand, as regard the downward trend, the quantity of wheat export in Australia were down over the period. It started at 15 million tons in 1985. After that, the import improved with at least 1 million tons before it continously declined in the next years, hitting the lowest wheat export figure as little as 12 million tons in 1990
The line graph illustrates the
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exportation of three areas,
namely
Australia, Canada and European Community from 1985 to 1990.

Overall
, the
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wheat
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export
in Australia decreased over time while the
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export
in Canada and European countries
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saw
an upward trend with
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some
fluctuations. It is noticeable to
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that Canada had the highest oscillations throughout the period.

Initially
, in 1985, Canada exported the highest
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quatity
of
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wheat
which approximately 19
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million
tons.
Subsequently
, in the
next
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year
, it decreased
slightly
to about 17
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before
it
significantly
increased in the following two years, reaching 25
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million
tons in 1988, which is the peak of the whole
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period
.
However
, it plunged by 11
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million
tons from 25
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tons in 1988 to under 15
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million
tons in 1989. After that, it settled to 20
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million
tons at the
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end
of the
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period
. The European countries exported approximately 17. 5
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tons of
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wheat
in 1985 and the
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export
fell under 15
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million
tons in 1986. Then, it rose to 15
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tons in the subsequent
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year
and remained steady in 1988. EU’s
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wheat
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surged in the
next
two years and in the last
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of
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, their
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wheat
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was more than 20
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million
tons.

On the other hand
, as regard the downward trend, the quantity of
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wheat
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export
in Australia were down over the
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period
. It
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started
at 15
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million
tons in 1985. After that, the import
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improved
with at least 1
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before
it
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continously
declined in the
next
years, hitting the lowest
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figure as
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as 12
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million
tons in 1990
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IELTS essay topic illustrates the wheat export of three areas

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
268 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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