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The Cycle of Water Water is vital for life. The water on Earth and in the atmosphere is part of an ever moving cycle. Writting the process of that the Cycle of Water.

The Cycle of Water Water is vital for life. The water on Earth and in the atmosphere is part of an ever moving cycle. Writting the process of that the Cycle of Water. m3QP8
The picture demonstrates the cycle of making water in nature. This cycle has 4 steps. Firstly, when the temperature is high enough, the water in seas, oceans, and lakes (96, 5% of the Earth's water are these) evaporates up. After this step, there is a condensation of water when it meets the clouds. In the following step, the drops of water which have been condensed come up into the atmosphere. These contain 0. 001% of the Earth’s water, this percentage equals 12. 900 cubic km of Earth’s water. Finally, in a suitable condition, the precipitation of water has happened. For instance, it’s raining, the drops of water fall down into the rivers and run to the rivers again, this step initializes a new cycle of water. This cycle repeats forever to maintain the water in our life.
The picture demonstrates the
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of making
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in nature. This
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has 4
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steps
.
Firstly
, when the temperature is high
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, the
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in seas, oceans, and lakes (96, 5% of the Earth's
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water
are these) evaporates up. After this
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step
, there is a condensation of
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water
when it meets the clouds. In the following
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, the drops of
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water
which have
been condensed
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come
up into the atmosphere. These contain 0. 001% of the Earth’s
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water
, this percentage equals 12. 900 cubic km of Earth’s
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water
.
Finally
, in a suitable condition, the precipitation of
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water
has happened.
For instance
, it’s raining, the drops of
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water
fall down into the rivers and run to the rivers again, this
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step
initializes a new
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of
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water
. This
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cycle
repeats forever to maintain the
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water
in our life.
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IELTS essay The Cycle of Water Water is vital for life. The water on Earth and in the atmosphere is part of an ever moving cycle. Writting the process of that the Cycle of Water.

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