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Topic: Governments shoud spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.2

Some people might argue that railways should be prioritized nowadays. However, i believe that in today’s world authorities should invest more money in constructing roads rather than railways. In this essay several reasons will be discussed regarding the particular issue. Firstly, the main reason for establishing new roads is that demands for it are greater than road lines. Government should take into consideration that a number of cars are increasing annually, leading to exceeding amount of traffic. Therefore, to resolve this problem road lines should be more prioritized. Moreover, it is evident that erecting more railways require considerably more money and time. For the exact reason government should be more concentrated on roads. Another point is related to situating roads in certain geographical areas. It is obvious that construction of railways in different places is not always possible, therefore, road lines are more preferable. On the flip side advantages of railways cannot be denied. With the help of train one can get any destination faster and cheaper. Additionally, they do not get stuck in traffic which makes it more ideal for the passengers. Furthermore trains are more eco-friendly due to the fact that they do not emit carbon monoxide which can pollute the air. To sum up, although the benefits of railways, roads are considered more convenient and cheaper to establish. Consequently, the government should allocate proper funding for road lines.

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railways
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today
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rather
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railways
. In this essay several reasons will be discussed
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Firstly
, the main reason for establishing new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
roads
 is that demands for it are greater than You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
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lines
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
Government
 should take into consideration that a number of cars are increasing annually
, leading to exceeding amount of traffic. Therefore
, to resolve this problem You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboundaryedgechannel
lines
 should be more prioritized. Moreover
, it is evident that erecting more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtracklinerail line
railways
 require considerably
 more money and time. For the exact reason This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 should be more concentrated on roads.

Another point is related
 to situating You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
roads
 in certain geographical areas. It is obvious that construction of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtracklinerail line
railways
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different
 places is not always possible, therefore
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
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lines
 are more preferable.

On the flip side advantages of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtracklinerail line
railways
 cannot be denied
. With the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of train one can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
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, they do not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
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 it more ideal for the passengers. Furthermore
 trains are more eco-friendly due to the fact that they do not emit carbon monoxide which can pollute the air.

To sum up, although the benefits of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtracklinerail line
railways
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
roads
are considered
 more convenient and cheaper to establish. Consequently
, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 should allocate proper funding for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboundaryedgechannel
lines
. 