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TOPIC Bill Gates said, "the internet has always been useful in all areas of human life." What do you think about his comments?

TOPIC Bill Gates said, "the internet has always been useful in all areas of human life. " What do you think about his comments? kbaxR

Nowadays, when we say about internet, no one is don't know about it. Internet has always been important and usefull in all areas of human life, and I think Bill Gates said true. Social networks have many forms, and it have on many items such as desktop computers, laptops, tablets, phones. . . and it also having social media we using everday as Facebook, Instagram, . . . We use that for our job, or entertainment, chat with friend, we also update the information news about society faster and we can read it everywhere, everytime. Internet now also place to some young people to starup their bussiness, because it is accessible to many people and has things to support sellers especially advertising from that, their bussiness will be know by customers. But the others side of internet that the childrent or the user spent too much time for their phone to play game or social media and that can lead to game addiction or get too much non-selective information which will be bad for them. So we have to spent enough time to surf the internet and kids have play with the watching of their parents. Internet has been and is growing everytime, and it has become an indispensable part of human life today and in future.

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is don't
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important
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usefull
 in all areas of human life, and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 Bill Gates said true. Social networks have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
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everytime
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now
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some
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people
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bussiness
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because
 it is accessible to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
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people
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 advertising from that, their Possible spelling mistake found.businessbossinessfussinessbushiness
bussiness
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know
 by customers. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 the others side of internet that the Possible spelling mistake found.childrenchild rent
childrent
 or the user spent too much time for their phone to play game or social media and that can lead to game addiction or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 too much non-selective information which will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 for them. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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 we This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
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enough
 time to surf the internet and kids have play with the watching of their parents. Internet has been and is growing Possible spelling mistake found.every time
everytime
, and it has become an indispensable part of human life This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
 and Did you mean: "in the future"?in the future
in future
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