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Topic 2: Do you want to work in Vietnam or in another country when you grow up? ( 75 - 150 words)

Topic 2: Do you want to work in Vietnam or in another country when you grow up? ( 75 - 150 words) 2KrAo
The trend of working oversea has increased recently. Although working in another country may have some culture shocks at first, it unquestionably brings me numerous chances to broaden my mind. In my opinion, working in foreign country will absolutely enhance my self-reliance if I go abroad by myself. For example, I am not only do the household chores on my own, but also learn how to cook. On top of that, I can keep on good terms with international colleagues come from all over the world as well as enrich my knowledge about cutural diversity from them. Last but not least, working in another country is an ideal environment for me to develop myself and helps me achieve better living conditions. With these in mind, I believe that working abroad is benefical. Although it has some difficulties, it doesn’t matter.
The trend of
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working
oversea has increased recently. Although
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working
in another country may have
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some
culture shocks at
first
, it
unquestionably
brings me numerous chances to broaden my mind. In my opinion,
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working
in foreign country will
absolutely
enhance my self-reliance if I go abroad by myself.
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, I am not
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only
do the household chores on my
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own
,
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but
also
learn how to cook.
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, I can
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keep
on
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good
terms with international colleagues
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come
from all over the world
as well
as enrich my knowledge about
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cutural
diversity from them. Last
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but
not least,
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working
in another country is an ideal environment for me to develop myself and
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helps
me achieve better living conditions. With these in mind, I believe that
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benefical
. Although it has
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difficulties, it doesn’t matter.

IELTS essay Topic 2: Do you want to work in Vietnam or in another country when you grow up? ( 75 - 150 words)

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  American English
1 paragraphs
140 words
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4.0
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