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Too many accidents are caused by careless young drivers.

Too many accidents are caused by careless young drivers. PRKAE
It is becoming increasingly difficult to ignore the significance of road accidents and associated loss of life on the roads, especially due to rash and reckless driving by youngsters. It is clear that too many accidents are caused by careless, young drivers because they are easily distracted while driving, they race and speed alot on the road and they listen loud music which makes them unaware of their surroundings.
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increasingly
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the significance of road accidents and associated loss of life on the roads,
especially
due to rash and reckless driving by youngsters. It is
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many
accidents
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by careless, young drivers
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they are
easily
distracted while driving, they race and speed
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IELTS essay Too many accidents are caused by careless young drivers.

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1 paragraphs
69 words
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