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describing a friend you like , 200 250 words

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Everyone always has at least a good friend in life. It might be your mother or a little girl in next door. Well, such a lovely memory when thinking about it. I didn't have a friend as a child until high school. In high school, I have met a little girl who was not beautiful at all, but she is a good listener that I have met before. We stuck together for four years since the first day in high school from now. She is not tall, but enough for me to hug. Even she is so negative, but when she comes to me, she becomes an optimist. I have hardly seen her tears or her anger since we were together or not. I admit that she is the one I admire, not only composed but also clever too, who knows many things that I had ever heard before about psychology, tradition, spirit, or a few tips to make you look good in the eyes of others. And She has a sweet style that when she wears some clothes have a pink or black tie, I could not help but laugh. After all, she still keeps that style when going to college and leaves it over in the following year. No matter how in our life, when we don't close together like we used to be, she is still my youth.
Everyone always has at least a
good
friend in life. It might be your mother or a
little
girl in
next
door. Well, such a lovely memory when thinking about it. I didn't have a friend as a child until high school. In high school, I have met a
little
girl who was not
beautiful
at all,
but
she is a
good
listener that I have met
before
. We stuck together for four years since the
first
day in high school from
now
. She is not tall,
but
enough
for me to hug. Even she is
so
negative
,
but
when she
comes
to me, she becomes an optimist. I have hardly
seen
her tears or her anger since we were together or not. I admit that she is the one I admire, not
only
composed
but
also
clever too, who knows
many
things that I had ever heard
before
about psychology, tradition, spirit, or a few tips to
make
you look
good
in the eyes of others. And She has a sweet style that when she wears
some
clothes have a pink or black tie, I could not
help
but
laugh.
After all
, she
still
keeps
that style when going to college and
leaves
it over in the following year. No matter how in our life, when we don't close together like we
used
to be, she is
still
my youth.
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IELTS essay describing a friend you like, 200 250 words

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  American English
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231 words
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