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Describe a common morning

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It was a cold morning in London, Robert, as always, left his house at 8: 25 sharp, he had been leaving the house at this time each morning to go to work for 20 years. Along the path toward the underground station, Robert found a bin where he could throw away his rubbish, so he picks up the lid of the bin and saw inside it a wonderful red dress. He shivered while his mind started to think about the past. A woman came into Robert’s mind, he didn’t know her name, rather who she was, but for Robert, she was so fetching. He had been seen her a couple of times in the past when Robert was standing waiting for the train. After this flashback Robert continued his walk bound the station, after reaching it he realised that the door of the subway was sealed, he snorted. He was keen to catch the train scheduled at 8: 35 to be in the office at 9 sharp. While he was standing in front of the closed door, he glimpsed a placard, over it there was write “Underground closed due to wedding” after he read that, he was so upset, he had always hated the wedding, and he had sworn to never wed a woman. He was so harshly about this topic. After that he changed his plans “Rather than go to work, I’ll go to pay the bill” he said. He has some bills which were due by the day after. While he was walking toward the post office he saw a snail crawling on the road, he thought “It’s going to rain”.
It was a
cold
morning in London, Robert, as always,
left
his
house
at 8: 25 sharp, he had been leaving the
house
at this time each morning to go to work for 20 years. Along the path toward the underground station, Robert found a bin where he could throw away his rubbish,
so
he picks up the lid of the bin and
saw
inside it a wonderful red dress. He shivered while his mind
started
to
think
about the past. A woman came into Robert’s mind, he didn’t know her name,
rather
who she was,
but
for Robert, she was
so
fetching. He had been
seen
her a couple of times in the past when Robert was standing waiting for the train. After this flashback Robert continued his walk bound the station, after reaching it he
realised
that the door of the subway
was sealed
, he snorted. He was keen to catch the train scheduled at 8: 35 to be in the office at 9 sharp. While he was standing in front of the closed door, he glimpsed a placard, over it there was
write
“Underground closed due to wedding” after he read that, he was
so
upset, he had always hated the wedding, and he had sworn to never wed a woman. He was
so
harshly
about this topic. After that he
changed
his plans “
Rather
than go to work, I’ll go to pay the bill” he said. He has
some
bills which were due by the day after. While he was walking toward the post office he
saw
a snail crawling on the road, he
thought
“It’s going to rain”.

IELTS essay Describe a common morning

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
273 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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