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Tommorow is important and previous, aacording to few person and society should focus on present as compre to further.agree / disagree

Tommorow is important and previous, aacording to few person and society should focus on present as compre to further. agree / disagree BLn2w
It is irrefutable that, current as well as subsequent years play an increasingly significant role in the development and stability of a person. Hence, it is tell by plathore of people that, community need to focus an upcoming days rather than present. The concern compels to look into both aspects and I opine, present time should be necessary but ought to future is also essential for human being. To commence with, there are two major benefits associated with the, current time put the direct impacts future. First and foremost, it is quite evident that, they can create numerous type of mental disorders such as; headache, B. P. and many more, results in ignoring the present stage of their life, which has becomes a dominant reason of behind this sitution. it. To explain it, if they do not concentrate on their present and focus on overthinking for their next stage, they will depressed as result in, neither they can focus get on present not future by masses. Apart from health issues, the other factor can be taken into prime consendration is that, memories is a good thing. be To elobrate it, when they enjoy every moments of their lives, they do not need to does regret on their past in their planned life. Although focusing on present have benefical for person in plathora of ways, but future have own importance. Primarily, doing attention on upcoming years could therotically be advantages in order to he will gain an experience and collect much more money. On the face of it, they motivate themselves for making their career and do hard work for lives a luxury lifestyle, they will gain reputation by capital and collect experience which they takes to find their goal. For instance, a lot of policies and rule regulation made by admistrstion for securing their future. Thereafter, they give suggestion to their citizen for saving the natural resources and used it according to their need. In addition, they will make safe eventual years. To conclude, after examining the both views, it is recepitulated that, both have their own significance. In my prospective, it is totally depends on person, which type of their mentality and they think according to their thinking.
It is irrefutable that,
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current
as well
as subsequent years play an
increasingly
significant role in the development and stability of a person.
Hence
, it is
Consider using a past participle here: "told".
tell
by
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plathore
of
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people
that, community need to focus an upcoming
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "day"?
days
rather
than
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
present
. The concern compels to look into both aspects and I opine,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
present
time should be necessary
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
ought to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
future
is
also
essential for human being.

To commence with, there are two major benefits associated with
Did you forget something after 'the'?
the,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
time put the direct impacts
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
future
.
First
and foremost, it is quite evident that, they can create numerous type of mental disorders such as; headache, B. P. and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
more, results in ignoring the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
present
stage of their life, which has becomes a dominant reason of behind this
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sitution
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
it
. To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
it, if they do not concentrate on their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
present
and focus on overthinking for their
next
stage, they will
The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "depress"
depressed
as result in, neither they can focus
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
present
not
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future
by masses. Apart from health issues, the other factor can
be taken
into prime
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consendration
is that, memories is a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
thing.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
be
To
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elobrate
it, when they enjoy every
The noun should be probably in the singular form: "moment"?
moments
of their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
, they do not need to
The verb after "to" should be in the base form: "do".
does
regret on their past in their planned life. Although focusing on
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present
have
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benefical
for person in
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plathora
of ways,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
future
have
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own
importance.
Primarily
, doing attention on upcoming years could
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therotically
be advantages in order to he will gain an experience and collect much more money. On the face of it, they motivate themselves for making their career and do
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
work for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
a luxury lifestyle, they will gain reputation by capital and collect experience which they
The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "take"
takes
to find their goal.
For instance
,
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a lot of
policies and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rule
regulation made by
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admistrstion
for securing their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
future
. Thereafter, they give suggestion to their citizen for saving the natural resources and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
it according to their need.
In addition
, they will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
safe eventual years.
To conclude
, after examining the both views, it is
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recepitulated
that, both have their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
significance. In my prospective, it is
totally
depends on person, which type of their
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
mentality and
they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
according to their thinking.
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IELTS essay Tommorow is important and previous, aacording to few person and society should focus on present as compre to further. agree / disagree

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
369 words
5.5
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