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TOEFL Integrated speaking, question 5 - Briefly summarize the problem the speakers are discussing. Then state which solution you would recommend and explain the reasons for your recommendation. - Preparation Time: 20 SecondsResponse Time: 6 v.1

TOEFL Integrated speaking, question 5 - Briefly summarize the problem the speakers are discussing. Then state which solution you would recommend and explain the reasons for your recommendation. - Preparation Time: 20 SecondsResponse Time: 6 v. 1
Nowadays, urbanization happens in many places all around the world so the cities usually have to deal with many types of social issues. Some people think that the government should advise people to move to different places like regional town and from my point of view, this could be an ideal way to solve all the problems. As far as I know, crime rate in large cities has dramatically increased the recent years. It is true that some authorities have failed to control the using of guns leading to many consequences. The traffic jam is also a popular problem that urban residents have to deal with. The eco-system is also being threatened by the numerous number of vehicles. As a result, pollutions have significantly risen in urban areas leading to many environmental problems. As I mention, people living in big cities have to face many problems in everyday life. There are many reasons why people should move to the regional towns instead of living in big cities. Firstly, the government can solve the over-population problems and reduce the economic disparities in different territories. Secondly, all the traffic issues can be decreased and the police force could be able to control the criminals. The social life would be safer in the future. Moreover, the environment would be greener and the people will not have to suffer from climate change. We are living in a 21st century where people have many modern problems to face with. Personally, I think some city residents should move to regional towns so that they can reduce the issues. The quality of life could improve in the near future if we made the right decisions.
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places all around the world
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so
the
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cities
usually
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have to
deal with
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many
types of social issues.
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Some
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people
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think
that the
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government
should advise
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people
to
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move
to
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different
places like regional town and from my point of view, this could be an ideal way to solve all the problems.

As far as I know, crime rate in large
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cities
has
dramatically
increased the recent years. It is true that
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some
authorities have failed to control the using of guns leading to
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many
consequences. The traffic jam is
also
a popular
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problem
that urban residents
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have to
deal with. The
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eco-system
is
also
being threatened
by the numerous number of vehicles.
As a result
, pollutions have
significantly
risen in urban areas leading to
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many
environmental
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problems
. As I mention,
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people
living in
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big
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cities
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have to
face
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many
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problems
in everyday life.

There are
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many
reasons why
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people
should
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move
to the regional towns
instead
of living in
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big
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cities
.
Firstly
, the
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government
can solve the over-population
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problems
and
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reduce
the economic disparities in
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different
territories.
Secondly
, all the traffic issues can
be decreased
and the police force could be able to control the criminals. The social life would be safer in the future.
Moreover
, the environment would be greener and the
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people
will not
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have to
suffer from climate
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change
.

We are living in a 21st century where
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people
have
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many
modern
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problems
to face with.
Personally
, I
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think
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some
city residents should
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move
to regional towns
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so
that they can
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reduce
the issues. The quality of life could
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improve
in the near future if we made the right decisions.
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IELTS essay TOEFL Integrated speaking, question 5 - Briefly summarize the problem the speakers are discussing. Then state which solution you would recommend and explain the reasons for your recommendation. - Preparation Time: 20 SecondsResponse Time: 6 v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
278 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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