People have different views about which factor affects children the most in their lives. While there are many factors which have significant impacts on their development, I believe that the most important one is their family.
On the one hand, children are influenced by a wide range of factors due to the way that they acquire knowledge. It is scientifically proved that youngsters learn primarily by observing and imitating what they witness. This is the reason why everything going on around children such as television, music and friends can bring enormous effects to their development. For example, there is evidence that if a child watches violent TV shows on a regular basis, he or she will be more likely to become a school bully, in comparison with the ones who do not.
On the other hand, family performs the most vital role in children’s maturity because of their lack of moral awareness. According to research, although children are able to learn new things rapidly; they, especially the younger ones, normally have a poor sense of right and wrong. As a result, it is essential for them to be oriented by their parents, who are in the closest proximity to them, to become respectable citizens in the future. For instance, in order to help their offspring have a solid academic foundation, which is apparently crucial for their future careers; parents can easily encourage them to spend long time studying both in and after school by giving them suitable rewards.
In conclusion, I can understand why children are affected considerably by a variety of factors. However, it seems to me that family is the one having the most powerful influence on their development as a result of the above-mentioned reasons.
People
have
different
views about which
factor
affects
children
the most in their
lives
. While there are
many
factors
which have significant impacts on their development, I believe that the most
important
one is their family.
On the one hand,
children
are influenced
by a wide range of
factors
due to the way that they acquire knowledge. It is
scientifically
proved that youngsters learn
primarily
by observing and imitating what they witness. This is the reason why everything going on around
children
such as television, music and friends can bring enormous effects to their development.
For example
, there is evidence that if a child
watches
violent TV
shows
on a regular basis, he or she will be more likely to become a school bully,
in comparison
with the
ones
who do not.
On the other hand
, family performs the most vital role in
children’s
maturity
because
of their lack of moral awareness. According to research, although
children
are able to learn new things
rapidly
; they,
especially
the younger
ones
,
normally
have a poor sense of right and
wrong
.
As a result
, it is essential for them to
be oriented
by their parents, who are in the closest proximity to them, to become respectable citizens in the future.
For instance
, in order to
help
their offspring have a solid academic foundation, which is
apparently
crucial for their future careers; parents can
easily
encourage them to spend long time studying both in and after school by giving them suitable rewards.
In conclusion
, I can understand why
children
are
affected
considerably
by a variety of
factors
.
However
, it seems to me that family is the one having the most powerful influence on their development
as a result
of the above-mentioned reasons.