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(4) Nowadays, a lot of buildings, such as offices and schools, are now being built with an open plan design. Why is that? Do you see this as a positive or negative development?

(4) Nowadays, a lot of buildings, such as offices and schools, are now being built with an open plan design. Why is that? Do you see this as a positive or negative development? QLm9b
In this modern era, the construction of buildings is being rose rapidly day by day, and numerous establishments like business offices and educational institutes are being built along with a fully developed plan structure. This phenomenon proves beneficial for the employees as well as students and there are several reasons for this happening and some of them are elucidated with their positive development.
In this modern era, the construction of buildings is being rose
rapidly
day by day, and numerous establishments like business offices and educational institutes are
being built
along with a
fully
developed plan structure. This phenomenon proves beneficial for the employees
as well
as students and there are several reasons for this happening and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
of them
are elucidated
with their
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
development.

IELTS essay (4) Nowadays, a lot of buildings, such as offices and schools, are now being built with an open plan design. Why is that? Do you see this as a positive or negative development?

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